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can you pm me when you write more i really liked it it has a good mix of fantasy and real life its not just a bunch of magic and ...

i really like this kind of forbidden love I like it I hope you continue it has lots of potential

LOVE IT some minor typos but i loved the story it was a different and beutiful love story it was soo sweet i LOVE IT

this made me cry I now understand what my grandma went through.

I think with the amounts of critiques that it would be pointless but I really liked the story and i want more could you maybe post more?

this is good I like it I noticed a few grammar mistakes but other that that it is really good I liked the story line. I hope you are going ...

Please write more I realy like it.

I want more what happens i love it there are a few mistakes but I think everybody else caught them. This is good thak you for posting it.

thank you every one who commented i leared a lot. Including that this is realy hard and not my thing so thanks everybody who comented and read this.

i want more!i its really beautiful i love it,

i love this it is soo cool keep writing ur right about that last chapter the descripions are bland. i like how you put in that changing scean with ms.sal.

omg so wesome you realy don't expect the ending i was so suprised! sorry this int very helpful.

omg so qwesome you realy dont expect the ending i was so suprised! sorry this ist very helpful.

this is realy interesting i would want to read more.some editing would be helpful. keep writing.