chloe13

Loved it! I whole-heartedly agree that Harry shall always have a special place in my heart :( Plus, I heard Rowling was maybe going to write more, I don't know ...

HAHA brilliant! This is exactly my school . . . sometimes I feel like mowgli :D

I don't really know alot about poetry, but the imagery was really vivid in this and the rhymth make sit really easy and enjoyable to read . . . made ...

Loved it! The start reminds of something that happened to my friend, reminds me of how we both felt . Just one thing, how she clenches her fists until she ...

Can't say anything anyone else hasn't about this, besides that I think it's excellent! I'm sure we can all relate to this is some shape or form. Keep it up ...

I'm intrigued! It almost seems believable that that is what could happen to the world, (since religion is so . . .how should I say . . .Highly regarded.) You ...

I liked it! The way the kids react to eachother is really natural and believable. And I agree, it's like in books people just assume everyone is white until the ...

‘The bird of Hermes is your name, eating your wings to make you tame, not king, nor prince, why can’t they see? a crow, yes a crow is what you’d ...

Wow, this evokes such strong emotion . . sad, I nearly started to cry! The bit at the end was really beautiful, you're a really talented writing and I hope ...

I thought this was really beautifully written, and for me it held a really strong meaning. Well done!

I agree, this MUST be continued!

HAHA! I laughed so hard at "chillin in Ron Weasley's car" This is so original and clever! For the love of god, keep writing:D

This was really touching, I think I'm gonna go hug my Dad now haha :) It's brilliant in its simplicity really. Do you do any other kinds of writing? Like ...

I really like this story :) Your writing style is good, just it seems your sentences are really repetitive in the struture you use like; "I couldn’t shake the image ...

Good good! haha I was actually starting to feel really claustrophobic at the start! Really entertaining to read and you've left me wanting more! keep it up!