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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Fall of Potential

    I liked it, I got an image of a boy/man who has no direction in his life, whose goals have all gone away. You do need to put in some ...

    Feb 26, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    It had a nice flow and feel, needed more meaning. With a little work, you could get some emotion into it, but right now, it's just a nice-sounding set of ...

    Feb 26, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Groundhog Day

    I liked the last stanza, too, it was more original. It seemed like the last stanza was almost a different poem, it didn't fit well with the other two. The ...

    Feb 26, 2007


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint