christian

this great but the line "no must ever know" doesn't make much sense i think you were trying to say '"none would notice" at least that's what i would say ...

sorry that was a accident didn't want to do that but great story kinda odd i didn't quite get but i thought it was good sorta inspiring i have never ...

great overall story but some may not like the swearing and stuff like that but i like the story line alot and how you but the scene in motion and ...