christinaLoves

no problem

I agree with shinethroughthedark. This poem is absolutely perfect. It is accurate, it has feeling, it is honest. I really think you have done a good job. Keep writing, please.

This is terribly beautiful. I almost cried because I can totally relate to these feelings. I love everything about it. I am totally grateful that you would write something like ...

Right after you said "'Cause the room is so quiet; His moan sounds like a riot." You went on to lose me. I lived it up until that point. I ...

Wow. Good job, Mikko. I really feel you here. Thank you, for being so straight forward. Christina...

I agree!!

You have no friggin idea how much I like this song... Its so good and so nicely written. And, oh the metaphors... I love it. Good job. Keep writing. And, ...

Nice.

Love it. And I haven't met you, but I love you too. Only joking! Christina!!

Wow. All I can say is... wow. It was intense and fast paced, and I really think you did a good job. You should definately keep writing! Great job!! Christina!

I really think you did a good job. However, it is kind of confusing when you change the subject. I don't know if it's supposed to be like that, or ...

I appreciate your help! Thank you, so much. I'll try to be more "show not tell" in my work.

Thank you. I don't think anyone can either :)

Thinking about adding this.

"Please" He whispers. " Please, try to understand." What did he say? "Understand what?" He stabs my with his expression. His eyes are full of pain and pleading. "Show me ...