chucki666

i liked you poem, very good :] but the last part doesnt do justice to the whole poem.

like most of your comments, i am not a poem critic so i'm not much help either. But, this was amazing, i loved it :]

unlike the others, i really liked this piece. both original and the new editied one.

i ejoyed this, it's really good, although i was a bit confused on what your message was in here, what your trying to say. You have potential, keep on writing. ...

the idea is good, i agree about the rape, i think you should work on it.

I agree, the idea of suicide has beeen done countless of times, but the idea isnt a bad one, atleast i think, just make it more unique, better wording and ...

i loved this, its probably one of my favorite's i've read so far.

i really loved this, it showed your emotion, it didn't matter to me if it didnt ryhme or had a rythem, it was still pretty great.

i agree with most of them, i liked it, just add more feeling to it, because it was short it didnt show much, but what you did was pretty great ...

i like this, it was different, and different is always better.

i agree with the people above me, you started out well, keep going :]

it was a bit confusing a bit, considering it starts in the first line, then ends in the second, while starting the other one. other than that, i liked it.

i loved this. period.

i really liked this. :]