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  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Babysitting (Flash Fiction)

    Hi there! I love love love the idea for this story. However, some of the sentences feel very choppy. For example, the lines "A fresh breeze blew through the open ...

    Sep 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: thunderstorm

    This was absolutely wonderful. I loved the visuals and the personification displayed in this! My only critic would probably be in the sentence "her hugs cut through my body...", as ...

    Sep 23, 2018


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone