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  • Other Poetry Re: Bitten

    Bitten Heating, fomenting, hot. Arms shaking, grasping, scraping, begging. Embrace exiting. Falling. Cooling, soothing, gentle, How it feels to be kissed by the Snow To be without breath, Sin fear. ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Rainbow In The Wind (Contest Entry)

    Hey, it's nice to be reading something like this. Now lets get down to business on critiquing. The theme is strong and has a nice through-line. But, I am going ...

    Jan 7, 2011


I send you buckets full of stars, the prettiest rainbow I've ever seen and a really adorable unicorn
— Zenith