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Oh, wow! This is absolutely amazing! I like how it's all prose-y in it's formatting, but it's really poetry at heart. The word choice is so poetic and lyrical. It ...

Aw, you're too hard on yourself! This isn't a piece of trash, it's actually quite good! This is really cute and sweet. There are a few mistakes that need to ...

Hi there! This comes off as a bit of an information dump to me. Now we pretty much know everything there is to know about Stephanie. Surely there could have ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! This is pretty darn good for a first attempt at a poem. The rhyme scheme works out nicely, and it flows fairly smoothly, although the ...

Hello, there! I'm going to be really nitpicky here, so I hope you don't mind. If it seems harsh, just remember I want to help. This is going to be ...

So I'm not a Kpop fan, so I won't be reviewing the content, but just skimming this story I can see that it needed a lot of grammatical work, so ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this! Your new version is much more descriptive and enjoyable to read. I found myself laughing at the beginning. Now, ...

Hello! Here to review, as requested! Your storytelling leaves a lot to be desired. Beginning by having the characters wake up is a very cliche way to do things. If ...

Hello, there! Wow! For a poem so short, you really pack a lot of punch with it! I like how the ending is sort of melancholy, but the overall tone ...

Awwww! This was really cute and sweet. I love love love the metaphor throughout the poem. Your use of imagery is fantastic throughout, and it never seems clunky. This is ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! I really liked reading this short story. The beginning part, about the Dodder Vine, was what really inspired me to read this. That was a ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I promise you will love it here! So, I really enjoyed reading this. It was very poetic, and flowed very well. It is kind ...

Wow, this is quite a deep poem! I've never really been a religious person, but I still really enjoyed reading this. The rhythm was breathtakingly beautiful, and the rhyme scheme ...

Hello there! Even though there are some things in this story that I personally don't agree with, I'm going to ignore that and review more technical stuff, which means that ...

Oh, yes, I know that feeling all too well. While I can totally, completely relate to this poem (I would imagine that most people on this site can), it's like ...