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Hey there! clogs here to review! You have some really powerful imagery here. Your word choice does a great job at getting the emotion across to the readers, so I ...

Hello again! clogs here to review! I'm not entirely sure why this is in "humor". Maybe I'm just a curmudgeonly old coot, but nothing really struck me as particularly humorous. ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! I think the first thing I'm going to comment on is the formatting. This could benefit from being split into stanzas. The YWS publisher ...

Hey, RadiantDemigod! XD clogs here to review! This poem has some really interesting ideas, and it explores them quite well. I like that it was comparing love and death rather ...

Hello again! clogs here for another review! I like the way this poem builds. You have it set up so that the reader wants to keep on reading- if you ...

Hey, Charlotte! clogs here to review! I think the main thing holding this poem back is the rhyming. Rhyming is a great poetic device and I have nothing against it, ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! clogs here to review! Not really sure how to start this, so I guess I'll just jump right in: The marvelous stars their endless ...

Now that I've finally made my way to a computer: I'm not gonna lie. As a gay person, I am incredibly upset by this work. It doesn't matter that "it ...

Hey there! clogs here to review in this closing stretch of Review Day! Ok, I have 20 minutes to review this in order to make it count for team Potter, ...

okkkkkkkkk here to actually review I think that what makes this story so sad is that the cat is so powerless. It's clear that she desperately wants to do something ...

Hey there, Stardust, and welcome to YWS! clogs here for a review. I think the biggest thing holding this poem back is the rhyming. Not only is it really inconsistent, ...

Hey there! clogs here to review! Oooh, this is nice! A few suggestions: First, some formatting tips: I feel like this would be better organized if you put space between ...

Ah, you just summed up everything that I find troublesome about Christianity. I'm going to review this under the assumption that this poem is referring to Christianity, so feel free ...

Hey, guineapiggirl! clogs here to rescue your poem from the Green Room! Eeeee, such a nice poem. I'm almost not sure where to start reviewing. I love the way that ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! clogs here to review! I think this poem's greatest strength is its imagery. The second-third lines of each stanza are undoubtedly the strongest, because ...