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Those are separate sentences. It would be grammatically incorrect not to capitalize them. I'll see if I can find some articles or something on free verse, because I really wish ...

Haha, viola power! XD

Yeah, I had a feeling you might review this. I honestly don't understand why you are so opposed to free verse poetry. You're missing out on so much. I might ...

Even if that were true, it's still incredibly childish to basically copy her review and submit it for points.

Haha, your reply was about the length of the review itself! Yeah, most of my area is Baptist, so that's mainly what I had in mind. I'm speaking from the ...

Oh I was kind of confused there XD But either way, it's an honor! :P

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*sneaks in* I like girls and I could call myself the gay overlord of the gay kingdom of gaytopia No you can't, because that's me.

Yeah, I'm not really sure why you posted this as a literary work. If you just wanted to share it with people, then you should've posted it on your wall ...

everything I know is a lie ;_; I pronounced rhythm like "ri-thum"... wonder what other words actually only have one syllable? :D

Okay, now that I know what a prayer labyrinth is the pieces are starting to fall into place. I understand a lot better now. I don't go to church, so ...

Thanks for the review! You're definitely right about "rainbow"- I couldn't think of any other LGBT metaphors. I also doubt this poem will ever see the light of day outside ...

Thanks for the review!

In answer to your question about the formatting: When you're in the YWS publisher, press "shift" along with "enter" when you're making a new line. That'll remove the double spaces. ...

You just made my day. Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed my works!