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I'm not an expert on poetry but I loved this. It seems so real. Lovely .

Just found this [you may have guessed] it's great! You conveyed the arguments going on in Harry's mind very well! I soooooooo want to know what's in the letter! Great ...

It didn't grab me. You should carry on writing it because i do actually want to find out what happens. Only because of the title though, not because of the ...

I think that was amazing! I think there could have been a bit more emotion expressed, though... I so want to read more! More hints more hints! Seriously, loved it.

Okay not really sure about this, just looking for some honest opinions, as usual thanks x * The wind blew wildly, hitting the sides of the small hut where Brittany ...

Woah....I just couldn't stop reading..! Really grabs your attention...3 years old or not..woah. I just noticed somewhere at the beginning I think you put "lasses" and I think you meant ...

This is seriously brilliant! I love it:) Amazing read , there's nothing bad I can say! x

I personally love it. Which is saying something seeing as I am normally completely. not into this kind of genre. You should definitely write more, it's a great start. It ...

Agree with everything everyone said! Glad you're over it now, it's really good though, I think. I think things are always good when many people can relate, like this. Nice ...

KNOW THIS FEELINGG! Like it..alot:) A lot of people will relate lol one typo you wrote "no more will we call each ohter for hours" Pretty sure you mean other? ...

She couldn't remember the last time she had laughed so hard, she couldn't remember the last time she had laughed at all. The sun shone down so brightly that day ...

This is amazing! I stumbled across it and was like oh... right, but loved it! It's really great, honestly loved it! But I spotted this... "he was always to busy ...

Woah, I honestly loved it! It gets you thinking and covers a lot of other things too like friendships and stuff. I really enjoyed this, well done!

It was coming to the end of the Summer. The days were getting shorter and the weather colder on the small Spanish island. More people were leaving everyday, the friends ...

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