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Re: Gender Norms and Stereotypes
Society says that there is total gender equality, men and women are completely equal. I think this is untrue. Women still get paid less for certain jobs than men and ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: 'Sup
Hey! I'm new, well I joined yesterday. I have no idea how I stumbled across this site really. I guess I just got lucky. I love to write, but NONE ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: It Was Time
Everyone's already pointed out the grammar points, but besides that the idea is brilliant. I really want to know more about them and why he's leaving and everything definitely carry ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Enough
I don't have a single bad point to mention, I think that's brilliant. I really love it, I don't know what else to say really. Keep up the great work!
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Trapped
Loved it! I just wanted to read more and know more, you should definitely write a follow up, I'd love to know more about her and him. Honestly amazing. Please ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Mixed Emotions
His eyes filled with love His smile fills the room His words flow smoothly and calmly He loves me deep within His eyes filled with hate His rage suffocates me ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: breath held the world may quiet, still
It's got great, depth, I think that's the right word. I'm not a big fan of poetry I think it's too simple (No offence to poetry writers-I know it takes ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: My man
This caught my eye. I think it's really good:) I think you should submit it to school, it's nice to read, and I can relate to it, I bet loads ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: The Last Kiss
I sat on the couch in his bedroom, looking up to the clouds passing by through the sky-light window. They seemed to me moving so fast, just like these last ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Untitled BUT Part 1
It's good! Keep it up...I guess the main things have already been pointed out, good work:)
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Breathing
...this is so good, where did you get the idea? It's so original, I've never read anything like it ! Everyone's already pointed out the simple spelling errors but, everyone ...
Feb 22, 2008
