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Just found this [you may have guessed] it's great! You conveyed the arguments going on in Harry's mind very well! I soooooooo want to know what's in the letter! Great ...

It didn't grab me. You should carry on writing it because i do actually want to find out what happens. Only because of the title though, not because of the ...

Woah....I just couldn't stop reading..! Really grabs your attention...3 years old or not..woah. I just noticed somewhere at the beginning I think you put "lasses" and I think you meant ...

I personally love it. Which is saying something seeing as I am normally completely. not into this kind of genre. You should definitely write more, it's a great start. It ...

This is amazing! I stumbled across it and was like oh... right, but loved it! It's really great, honestly loved it! But I spotted this... "he was always to busy ...

Loved it! I just wanted to read more and know more, you should definitely write a follow up, I'd love to know more about her and him. Honestly amazing. Please ...

It's got great, depth, I think that's the right word. I'm not a big fan of poetry I think it's too simple (No offence to poetry writers-I know it takes ...

...this is so good, where did you get the idea? It's so original, I've never read anything like it ! Everyone's already pointed out the simple spelling errors but, everyone ...