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Re: Dancing Under a Starry Sky
I'm not an expert on poetry but I loved this. It seems so real. Lovely .
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Diamond Angel
This is seriously brilliant! I love it:) Amazing read , there's nothing bad I can say! x
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Just a Friend
Agree with everything everyone said! Glad you're over it now, it's really good though, I think. I think things are always good when many people can relate, like this. Nice ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: No More (I'm done)
KNOW THIS FEELINGG! Like it..alot:) A lot of people will relate lol one typo you wrote "no more will we call each ohter for hours" Pretty sure you mean other? ...
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: Tom
Woah, I honestly loved it! It gets you thinking and covers a lot of other things too like friendships and stuff. I really enjoyed this, well done!
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: It Was Time
Everyone's already pointed out the grammar points, but besides that the idea is brilliant. I really want to know more about them and why he's leaving and everything definitely carry ...
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: Enough
I don't have a single bad point to mention, I think that's brilliant. I really love it, I don't know what else to say really. Keep up the great work!
Feb 23, 2008 -
Re: My man
This caught my eye. I think it's really good:) I think you should submit it to school, it's nice to read, and I can relate to it, I bet loads ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Untitled BUT Part 1
It's good! Keep it up...I guess the main things have already been pointed out, good work:)
Feb 22, 2008