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I apologize, I'm an imbecile sometimes.

Wow, nice. I loved the imaginary in this, very lyrical and enthralling. Not sure what the pint of the poem, or the meaning but hopefully you'll reply to the comment.

Thanks you for your critique :) as much as I loved the other comments, I needed an honest review.

Thank you! :)

Thanks Noelle, I really appreciate your critics.

Thanks:)

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks you for your review littleauthour, don't worry I will keep posting :)

Thank you! I really appreciate that. My title would probable be: Souless?

Thank you so much for reviewing this piece! I do agree with your critiques, they where very useful in improving the story.

Thanks man, that means a lot to me. I'll try and review some of your works if I get round to it!

Thanks for your review.

Just a comment but I thought it was very good!

Thank you, I will edit it all soon!