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colie18

  • Writing Tips Re: I Don't Know Where to Begin...

    Hey Guys, I am having a lot of trouble. I have tried to write about many things but I never seem to be able to finish it. I don't know ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hell's Rollercoaster

    wow I really like this. It kept me entertained the whole time! I enjoyed it very much!!! I found it interesting and no grammar or spelling mistakes at all! :)

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: An Angels Wings

    Thank You all! And yes it is a true story of my mothers battle with cancer. She died when I was 4 years old on Christmas. Thank You! I am ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Will You Fly With Me?

    After reading your poem here, I am at loss of words. This was beautifully written and even better with a picture to go along. This was inspiring and I absolutely ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: An Angels Wings

    You took a path That led to a better place Not but 12 years ago You flew with the angels To see the man That stood in so many of ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Everyone is perfect in an unusual way

    Hello! WOW I loved it so much, it is very inspirational! I do have one suggestion, maybe put it in this format the stanzas will make it stand out more! ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror

    Hello! I loved this poem! Its meaning struck me easily. You had a few spelling mistakes but otherwise I loved it. XOXO colie18

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wannabe Good Guy

    Hi there! I loved how strong a abstract the poem is, it definitely caught my attention, I am not the typical one to review unless something catches my attention. I ...

    Nov 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Why?

    From the day that I met you Until the day that I die My love for you Goes deeper And never goes blind. The smile I showed you And the ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Sonnet of Silent Death

    I like the poem, although that pain that you are trying to show in the piece is long overdue, you lag on getting to the point. I like the poem ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Rape of Erin Aghdra

    WOW!!! its story was compelling and just beautifully written!! The rhythm was perfect and the point of the story was direct! I love it!!!! Keep on writing!!

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You.

    I like it the way its written and everything, but I feel like I have heard it before, its like some others I have read before. But keep writing

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Rain

    I really like it, and just how everything flows perfectly together!! Keep writing

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I was wrong

    Wow!! I mean... it flowed soo perfectly and it caught my attention just from the first line. WOW!!! I really do like it, please keep writing!!

    Nov 3, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Littlest Moments that Make the BIGGEST Memories

    Hi Guys, so this is the first portion of a novel that I am writing and putting up. I am in the midst of writing this book, it is a ...

    Oct 23, 2010


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle