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thank you so much for your critique; it is very helpful.

:) thank you very much for your words. though i don't quite understand what you mean by "though I see a gap in between the description of the focus as ...

you keep throwing me off the edge of the galaxy with broken arms and tattered sleeves that with the wind confine and bind me to your statue; a scuplture of ...

thank you so much :)

the night is beautiful when it's cold out. my eyes are lost in the fourteen karat stars shimmering and twisting into words i can't escape - we're blanketed by this ...

This is beautiful and something so many people can relate with. The only thing I could mention would be the use of "dark" twice. A different adjective would make it ...

I also disliked the use of thy. However, the rest of it was incredible -- I really loved reading it. "Be not my world, where specks of white on thy ...

This made me smile so much! It's something that would be perfect for a greeting card. It was so simple but so meaningful, great work.