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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Scared

    This, like most other poems, didn't quite impress me due to how lame and generic it felt. Now, I'm not calling you lame, you still have a lot of potential, ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: September Eleventh

    Okay, cool, 9/11 poetry. Heavily indifferent on it because it's basically all the same thing, really. I didn't feel any strong emotions towards this because of how generic it felt. ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    I actually liked this work, but I do think there are fields that you need to work on. I can tell you were probably trying to mimic the usual satire ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Anxiety

    I don't quite get the satire in this, all I really see is the attempt to be edgy, to be completely honest. This doesn't float my boat like it does ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dirty Skies, Cloudy Knees

    This is counterculture to the point where it isn't funny on purpose, more so I can laugh about how counterculture this is. It's pretty pointless, to be honest. Okay, cool, ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: 'Til Death Do Its Part

    I didn't quite like this, though it did have some great elements. I felt, T times, that this was extremely silly and took away a good amount of the potential ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You Touch Everything

    Oh my gosh, this is genius! I absolutely love it because you prove everything wrong when people say "don't touch something". I love that fact of it. The writing was ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Dear Alexis

    Well, I don't try to be harsh, but I didn't like this. It was really harsh and I have a feeling this Alexis didn't quite deserve it. I feel like ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    This was immature and I don't like how you formatted, though the idea was v nice. For example, you took the idea of "mirror mirror" which is a common staple ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From

    I wasn't a fan of how you chopped this up. It was really awkward formatting that weighed this poem down heavily, which such a silly idea that seems ridiculous. It ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I did it for you

    I wasn't a big fan of this, but the idea is v intriguing and could be expanded immensely if you took this to free verse. The rhyme really put mud ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Thoughts; pronoun

    Absolute nonsense, I do not see the humorous appeal to this. I apologize if this isn't as quite professional as the other reviews, but I want to help. This senyru ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies

    Was this a joke? I didn't understand it. It seems near unreal because you're talking about something that reviewers probably know nothing about. It seems too unprofessional and I can't ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies

    I don't quite like this, to be honest. It feels generic and stereotypical to a T. You could improve on this as you do have some great potential but right ...

    Sep 21, 2015


If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet.
— Neil Gaiman