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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Broken Apart

    Your face of an angel Is right there when I need it I think you know how I feel But I won't tell you yet Everyone knows that we're best ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The New Guy

    More that expected, you're really a nice guy. I like the way you talk to me, the way you say goodbye. Hey, Bailey. I think that this stanza could go ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: past ( working on the title)

    Hey... language problem!!! I can't believe you! You never said that you would put it in there. But hey, I guess that's high school. Speaking of language, I think you ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perfection

    Yeah, I think that's a really good idea. I was just writing it from memory, so I was really surprised there wasn't more than that wrong! Thanks again.

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perfection

    Perfection Everybody thinks I'm perfect But I know I'm not And when everyone starts to find out about me I suddenly feel as if they forgot Exactly what I'm like ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Hopeless

    Hey, Abby. Good job for your first poem. It was really good except for a couple mistakes but someone else has already pointed those out so once again good job.

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hide me...

    That is so insightful and beautiful. I love it so much. You'll have to check out one of my stories sometime. Good luck with the rest of your writing

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Poetry Fight

    That was so funny, and Cat's right. It can be very true sometimes. :D

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Never Again

    Never Again Never Again will she go on walks with me. Never Again will she escort me to the car on my way to school. I Never Again will be ...

    Nov 16, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Titleless story

    Oh my goodness! That was so cool. I loved it!!!!

    Nov 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream

    yo Cat, that was so good. I can't wait to read the rest. see you at school tomorrow

    Nov 3, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Kay and the Magic Kingdom Keepers

    Hi. I’m Kayanna, but just call me Kay. I’ve been planning my parents’ second honeymoon for months. They were going on a cruise to the Carribean on the Costa Medi-something. ...

    Nov 2, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}

    That is such a sweet story!! I wish life was always that perfect!!!!!

    Nov 2, 2008


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain