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Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
May you please review and critique my first chapter. You can read the what kind of review I would like in the topic thread. Thanks a lot for even reading ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Rosey's reviews
I would really like an indepth critique and a lot of feedback ( if you like it, what you don't like...etc). I appreciate it since this is my first chapter ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Critique Boutique
If you could, can you inform me of places I can elaborate and extend my first chapter. I appreciate a very meticulous review. I can't wait to get one from ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Just a little bit meticulous...
This is my first chapter. I would appreciate it if you could review it and tell me where I can add some detail and what not. Thank You for the ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Hungry Poet!! Will do reviews!! <3
Are you willing to do a chapter instead of poem. I just think your methodology best fits what I am looking for. I know it's not your forte but I ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: A Sentence long book
Look at this article! What do the punctuation savvy and inclined members say? Thoughts and opinons
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: My first chapter of my first book
Thanks, yea, the rant was well deserved. It's not that I don't care, and I certaintly don't mean to be selfish I just could never get the hang of grammar. ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: ---
Its different how it has a opposite perspective from the biblical story. It percieves more logic, of course she would be angry . Its short but cunning...i like it a ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: My first chapter! of my first book! ..help! thank you
Yea I just wrote this today so its a rough draft but I found myself to be stuck so I decided I could use your help. Mainly, I want you ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: What It's Like to Be a Nobody
Pretty Good. It obviously has a resounding message that can be felt and understood. One of the few poems you can read and get the message of without reading it ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: To Make the Earth Smile
Overall I really liked this piece. There were some great and ingenious lines. Thats what I truly admire in a writer. I mean I only saw a couple of faults ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: My first chapter of my first book
yea i wrote this today so its pretty rough. I would appreciate it if anyone could review and critique it. Help me out with punctuation and grammar errors. I appreciate ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
I just wrote this its obviously a rough draft....I was wonder if you could critique it writing style...i know worded sentences awkwardly,find punctuation mistakes, grammar mistakes....what I really ne
Dec 29, 2010