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Yay! Thank you! I'll set to work about the bits that you have pointed out!

Nope you haven't been to harsh! Bring it on... I'll set about fixing those problems, and once I've done I'll re-post it. Thanx for reviewing!

Please could you review this please? It is an Action/Adventure but I really would like a full review which includes all aspects including the grammar, the characters, the plot etc. ...

Hi. This is quite good and I liked it. Here's a few Nitpicks: was blossoming . J ust jump in its harmless, it will carry you to safety. Madeline asked ...

This is great! Loved it. The only thing was: Josette LaVie crossed over to where the iron cannonball lay This was in the third or fourth paragraph, and to me ...

The Overnight Bus is just something I did when I was bored. The overnight bus was packed. I knew because my friend, Sophie had phoned me as she got on. ...

Hey! This is amazing, I really enjoyed it! I didn't notice any obvious spelling mistakes, and I don't have time to search really hard. I agree with CaitlinGrant that your ...

I think it's great so far, but it would be helpful if there was more description. "Farah Loughton." She blinked. Ms. Gorges was glaring behind her thick-framed glasses. "Stand up. ...

Thanx! I can't believe I couldn't see the "moths" spelling mistake. I've gone over it loads of times!

That's good then. You might have read Terry Practhett or James Barclay? I know my bro's read them. Wow, horses. I love them but if that was your only experience ...

Hi! This is my new story which I have just started. Before you start reading, I know I use the words 'But' and 'And' a lot. Especially when starting new ...

Okay, here goes my second review. I think it's a great story line and there's just one or two things which you must have not seen when going over your ...

HI! Yes, it's yet ANOTHEr newbie. Well, I'm afraid your stuck with me for a while - sorry. Okay, a bit about myself? I am totally horse crazy, mad, insane, ...

Hi! Okay, this is my first review so I'm sorry if it's bad. I like the way that it was speaking from the characters point of view (is that third ...