crazychicgonemad

This was amazing, the whole thing. I didnt want it to end haha.

I really liked the repition actually, it helped the structure and rythm of the poem.

I love you, he says. But can I believe him? Your beautiful, he says. But is it true? I'll never hurt you, he says. But will he? I'm yours forever, ...

I love you, he says. But can I believe him? You're beautiful, he says. But is it true? I'll never hurt you, he says. But will he? Im yours forever, ...

You give me a realy hard job, I cant find anything wrong with it...but thats just me.

ok fairy has already informed you about the sentence spacing and paragraphs so i wont repeated cause it kinda frustrates me when people send me stuff like that. I liked ...

ok, ok yeah i know it sounds twilighty, but in my defense Im in love with this kind of stuff and no matter how much i try it always comes ...

[pre]I woke up that day knowing he was gone, knowing he had left. The man I loved, the man who was insanely beautiful, the man who said he'd follow me ...