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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The War Not Won

    Wow... This is good. I like the semi-twist you put in there at the end... It really kept me reading. I like it :)

    Nov 12, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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