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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Opened Eyes

    Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Scars

    Hello there. I'm Rose, and I'm going to review this piece for you. Overall, this is a good piece of work. You have a way of creating interesting characters without ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Shadows

    Hello, Angelrose! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Trapped

    Hello, Kitty. I'm Rose, and I'm going to review this piece for you today. First, welcome to YWS. I hope that you'll like it here as much as I do. ...

    Apr 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days we Forget to Love- *Prologue* *Edited*

    Hey, Sparky! :D Overall, I love this piece. You've managed to make me like both of your characters without necessarily making me like the things that they're doing. That's impressive. ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: The thing about clouds is that they float.

    Hello, Spinelli. I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece. :D Overall, I liked this piece. When I'm reading anything, I'm constantly searching for interesting words used in interesting ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You Can't Imagine

    Hello there, Munchkin. I'm Rose, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. Overall, this is a nice piece of work. My favorite part of it is the ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Sky is Never the Same

    Hello there, Yubbies! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece. :D Overall, this piece has potential. I've read quite a few pieces that have resembled it - works ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Can't Wait

    Hello there, Fang! I'm Rose, and I'm here to review this piece! :D This is an adorable piece. It made me smile; it's always great when a piece of writing ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Icy Eyes

    Hello there, Monkey! My name's Rose, and I'm here to offer my thoughts on this piece. :D Overall, I like this song. My favorite part of it is the feeling ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Vines

    Hey, Katherine! I'm Rosie. :D This is a cool piece. It's shorter than most of the poetry works that I read around here, but it's still interesting and charming. Nice ...

    Dec 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Working on one

    Hello! You asked me for my thoughts concerning this, so I'm here to deliver. :) First, I'm not exactly sure why YWS isn't allowing you to break this down into ...

    Dec 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Seeing Distance

    Hey! I'm back. :) You posted on my wall asking me to return and see if I could find any grammatical errors, so here I am. "They’re all enjoining the ...

    Dec 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled for now

    Hello there, Trinity! You left a review request on my wall, so I'm here to take you up on it. :) Before I begin, please keep in mind that the ...

    Dec 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: My Little Invalid

    Hello, Noel! You posted a review request on my wall, so I'm here to, well, review this piece. :) Overall, this is a great piece of work. You kept me ...

    Dec 2, 2012


What holds you betwixt panic and serenity? That is, if it's not among the many querulous quagmires unfit for elaboration.
— soundofmind as Emiliano Achillinus