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  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Other Side of the Redwood Tree - Chapter 1

    Thrown into jail for growing plants? Goodness, I wondered what happened to make the world like this. Something terrible, perhaps. I hope that whatever was decided in The Jury won’t ...

    Oct 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Choosing Room

    That was really creepy, but interesting to read. I think that the creepiest parts of it all was how James was completely fine with dying and how Danny wanted to ...

    Oct 15, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Becoming the Big Bad Wolf

    I did not expect that plot twist. The half-human thing was made up? It was all in his head? Goodness, it actually makes sense now. The wolf is far more ...

    Oct 14, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Young Again in Autumn (Best Friend)

    I like how this poem talks about the beauty of friendship in the Fall. Middle school is the middleground of life. It lasts such a short time and must be ...

    Oct 13, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Nightmares

    How spooky and mysterious! I am left with a feeling of Halloween uneasiness after reading this. The being, was it the ex-girlfriend of Davis? Nicole? Or a friend? Had he ...

    Oct 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Exchange Student, Chapter 2

    The line is dead? That’s great. Now how is Mia going to get help? The only questions a 911 dispatcher is supposed to ask are what happened in the crime ...

    Oct 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Sincerely, Yours-Chapter two: Every Rose Has Its Thorn

    Nakata seems like the type of person who prefers to be left alone. If Herbert really loves her, then he would respect that. I’m sure that he just has a ...

    Oct 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Exchange Student, Chapter 1

    Hello! I’ve come to review your story. :> I like the mystery that’s there so far. It’s strange, how the boys are getting kidnapped and killed. On top of that, ...

    Oct 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Lurking Temptation

    I definitely got creepy/obsessive vibes from this poem. I have not read the books or listened to the song, but I will do so. It feels like the stalker has ...

    Oct 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: thesweetness&thelight

    I like the descriptive words in the poem. How you describe the pure elation of true love. The first time with romance is always the sweetest, the most cherished. It ...

    Oct 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lily's Pond

    Sooo romantic and magical! I love how Lily and the pond are connected, similar. It brings light and mystery to the romance with the teens. Both have more to them ...

    Oct 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4: Your World ( part 1)

    Noooo…. poor siren. She and her people were all cursed. I know that Thalia said that their looks would be cursed, but I think that the siren is beautiful in ...

    Oct 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 3 : From Me To You

    At this point I’m praying for their relationship to go well. They’re so wholesome and perfect for each other. :> It’s true love at its finest. I don’t think that ...

    Oct 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 2 : My You

    It’s been awhile since I’ve read the first chapter (sorry about that) but now I’ve come to read the second chapter! I like how excited the siren is. It’s the ...

    Oct 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 18

    I feel bad for Rei. She cares about all of them and only wants the best for the group. I don’t blame her for not trusting Keith. Keith and Rei ...

    Oct 1, 2023


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