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Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 17
The part with Keith tip-toeing had me laughing! I could imagine it perfectly in my head. The spaceship seems really homey for a spaceship. I like that! :> Sooner or ...
Sep 30, 2023 -
Re: Colored in Light
Beautiful and tragic. Marisol gave up Earth to set Julia free. True love at its finest. Is it possible that dying in space sounds more macabre than dying on Earth, ...
Sep 29, 2023 -
Re: The Unnamed Poem
I see this poem as someone with a big heart who loves all people dearly. The person cries because they feel intense amounts of frustration and sadness, but also because ...
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: The End of the World
This is my first time reading a script and I have to say, I like it. Why would Landon do such a thing as kill his parents? There must have ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: The Darkness
That ending was so sweet…I loved it. It seems like there is only Hell that awaits, until that one person shows up to help you out. It is hard for ...
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Dance With the Devil
I love this poem! It shows that The Devil is beautiful to entice others, to trick them. Kind of like how people deemed ”beautiful” by the majority of the world ...
Sep 25, 2023 -
Re: Sincerely, Yours- Chapter One: Through the Business Lane
William is going to Germany? Exciting! I wonder who this person that will bring romance to William’s life will be. He’s lucky that he got the job, now he has ...
Sep 24, 2023 -
Re: Round and Round Chapter 2
I have a feeling that Sylvia’s second attempt at killing herself and Jake isn’t going to work. Something is keeping them trapped in a loop. Or maybe it’s someone… I ...
Sep 23, 2023 -
Re: Round and Round Chapter 1
I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: Highway of Darkness
It’s horrible to think that there are people like the men driving the kids away in real life. One wonders what goes on in the children’s minds…and in this story, ...
Sep 21, 2023 -
Re: The Task of Silence
I love the imagery. It’s very descriptive and fun. It gets you in the mood of the poem. The poem itself is cryptic enough to be a riddle, but clear ...
Sep 20, 2023 -
Re: Why Try Walking … When You Can Dance
I liked this story. Despite it all, Lisanne preserved. She has a really big heart, because I wouldn’t have kept quiet about what Katherine did. Lisanne’s Mom is the best! ...
Sep 19, 2023 -
Re: Sakura 🌸
Kaori lived a good life, at least. She cared so much about the beauty of life and all around her. At least Kaori got to see the sakuras before she ...
Sep 18, 2023 -
Re: Dreamless (0)
I sense that there is something off about Caitlin’s life. She was homeschooled by a staff, which implies that her parents have a lot of money. Her parents hosted parties ...
Sep 17, 2023 -
Re: Expecto Patronum
It’s been a while since I’ve watched the Harry Potter movies and read the books. This poem makes me want to get back into the Harry Potter fandom. You’ve described ...
Sep 16, 2023
