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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 1

    I noticed that you posted the first chapter of “Not my Circus”, so I went to check it out. And guess what? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. Keith is so cute, ...

    Jul 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: Lost in limbo

    In the pursuit of dreams, the narrator was put in peril. The narrator wanted to have a good life, but the world’s waves crushed them and pushed them so far ...

    Jul 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Literature Re: Fall from the peak

    It’s not really a fall from grace, it’s a gift. A gift to feel and love. It’s the ticket to the real world, to know what all of it is ...

    Jul 29, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Fractures in Forever: Chapter 1: Briefing

    General O’Hare doesn’t seem to like Dr. Anderson at all. In his eyes, she sees herself as “better than everybody else”, when she actually just wants to make sure nothing ...

    Jul 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Fractures in Forever: Prologue

    What is this mysterious thing that they are working on? I wonder… It could be taking quite a toll on the workers, being locked with machinery and all the while ...

    Jul 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark truth E.2

    So the plot thickens! That boy in the photo wasn’t her brother, but the family’s painter. Maybe even the sister’s friend or boyfriend. Could it be that he is the ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark Truth E.1

    I saw this story and wanted to read this story for a while. So, here I am! I can say for certain that I’m coming back for more of this ...

    Jul 23, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: To My Friend, The Werewolf Girl

    That sounds like an epic friend! Dream friends are a nice escape from life. Maybe in another dream the werewolf girl might return, who knows? But it must have been ...

    Jul 22, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: One Day

    I imagine for this to be about walking through the nonsense of the world and just living life. My favorite parts were when chocolate and whipped cream were mentioned, just ...

    Jul 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    The turmoiling and bothersome thoughts can feel like a crescendo of high and low notes, changing in intensity, but never changing in effect. It can be hectic, but controlled to ...

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon

    This reminds me of “The sun proposed to the moon” trend on YouTube. I like it! Most people use the sun as a symbol of joy, but it’s the very ...

    Jul 19, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: lost song.

    Before I heard of lost media, I never thought that it was possible for a creative work to be lost to time. It makes me a little sad to think ...

    Jul 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Accidental Magic 2 the 2nd to last unicorn.....chapter 7

    Does Ellie’s spell that she did with Baddie have to do with Charlotte losing her memory, or is that completely separate? This is the end of part two? Oh boy…I ...

    Jul 17, 2023
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Of Fake and Real Time Travellers

    I like how you talked about humans reacting to unfamiliar things. It’s so true! Either they’re fascinated, freaked out, or both. I think that Simon was lonely and just having ...

    Jul 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Cruxless. Chapter's 1-4 of the rewrite, uh... It's still mid guy's don't worry. Not much has changed.

    It seems like from this rewrite, Cooper is more unsure about his fate. I like that! It’s interesting. Hinsa gives me Harley Quinn vibes. (Before she broke up with The ...

    Jul 15, 2023


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