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Re: The adventures of an AL beta chapter 8.
Cooper is the Bone God? It hasn’t been confirmed yet, but from what I read, I believe that Cooper is the missing Bone God, reborn as a human. Zach might ...
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Re: Adventures of an AL beta chapter 7.
There’s a new character talking in this chapter. I wonder if the POVS will keep changing. There seems to be more with being a God than Cooper and the other ...
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Re: Adventures of an AL. Beta chapters 1-6
So humanity is all gone and cyborgs are the only sources of life left? Interesting. I feel like Cooper was either a warrior, a warlord, or a general in his ...
Jun 27, 2023 -
Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 3: Misplaced bullseye
Jay and his Dad’s conversation seems realistic to me. The detail of Jay’s arrows forming a person is well done, showing how much his time as Ghost affected him. It’s ...
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Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 2: The Demon Wakes
The cozy vibes of the house and the unsettling vibes of the basement don’t feel too fast. A home gives comfort and a basement is prison. Jay’s hesitance to not ...
Jun 25, 2023 -
Re: Heir of Asratoil - Chapter 1
So they’re going on an adventure? Cool. I hope all goes well, but one can never be certain in adventures. Is it bad that I already ship Castian with the ...
Jun 24, 2023 -
Re: Arcadia Incorporated
That…that was so sad. Dillion is never going to see his family again. Everyone left on the planet would die. Unless they were somehow all able to find the information ...
Jun 23, 2023 -
Re: What is an AL?
Huh, that’s interesting. I’ll check out the series some time too. The idea of imaginary friends certainly is a curious thing. Why does anyone imagine their friends to look/act a ...
Jun 22, 2023 -
Re: Senior Year with an AL.
I’d thought it would be a teen-romance story, but that twist just changed everything. When they wake up, it feels like there is something wrong with their world. Something supernaturally ...
Jun 21, 2023 -
Re: The Incorrect Ballad
The first part I imagine to be about feeling confined in school. The second part I think is about a girl returning to her hometown. The third part is what ...
Jun 20, 2023 -
Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 1: The Ghost
I think that this chapter introduced Jay well. This story was so interesting that I had to keep reminding myself that it wasn’t fanfiction. Jay does come off as a ...
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Re: Hideout- A Star Wars Story
So they drove off into hyperspace? At least they are all safe for now. From what I can recall, nothing can find them in hyperspace. But wow, I can’t believe ...
Jun 18, 2023 -
Re: Ambush - A Star Wars Story
I don’t know much about Star Wars, but I do check it out once in a while. (I like Disney World’s Star Wars land). My favorite Star Wars character would ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: The Right Choice
This story was so mysterious, but with a hint of humor. I love it! I could see why Sayuki might have second thoughts on what she did, but I don’t ...
Jun 17, 2023 -
Re: the haunted areas pt 2
A hole opened into their universe? Interesting…could it be that their very universe is weak? Anything could come through. Earth could experience multiple dimensions coming into contact with it. Hope
Jun 15, 2023
