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Re: A Spider's Place
A lot of people are scared of spiders but this seems cute. I imagine a crowd of little black spiders crawling, in small, dainty flowers. This also made me think ...
Apr 9, 2023 -
Re: recycled
James and the Prince must have switched bodies. How did the swap happen, though? Who would switch their bodies? I don’t think that it’s Rachel or Maleficent that switched them. ...
Apr 8, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.1
Avenge the deaths of his parents? How noble of him! I wonder who killed his parents. Whoever did is going to have a horrible day. Damian and Athena must sense ...
Apr 6, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Prologue
Rei sounds like a zany little guy! Just an overall, all-around, fun little clown who loves mayhem and murder. I like Rei’s design, it’s cute and creepy. But from the ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: The Vulture
Either what happened was his (I’m assuming the narrator is a guy) imagination emphasizing the girl’s toxicity, or the girl is a literal monster that needs his life force to ...
Apr 3, 2023 -
Re: Kade and Raina - Part One
Cute beginning. :) I’m already shipping Kade and Raina even though they haven’t met yet. I think that Raina is Kade’s muse. Either Valerie is Raina’s girlfriend or her best ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Draft that I deleted
This essay was really interesting! I do agree that cliques shown in high school movies are annoying. It’s like the people making them don’t really care about teens. :( Everyone ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: The First Golden Goose and The Origins of The Knights: A KotGR Tale
What an inspiring origin story! I’ve found out a lot more YWS lore. :0 I wonder how many more golden goose hatchlings there are left. Probably a multitude of them. ...
Mar 31, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2- the second to last unicorn-chapter 4
Well I hope that they find Ellie soon, because being in an alternate dimension for too long could have some bad effects on her. What if she stays too long ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2-the second-to last unicorn-chapter 3
So Ellie has an evil twin? Interesting…wonder what the evil twin is going to do. Take Ellie’s unicorn? If the twin gets to it first, will the unicorn become evil? ...
Mar 28, 2023 -
Re: Spring Into Summer, and Summer to Fall
I’m going to have to watch “The Witch” one day, because I love the vibes in this poem. It seems like the narrator is giving themselves over to the tempting ...
Mar 27, 2023 -
Re: Aytra Islands Intro
WHOA… That was epic! The Dalis and the Anors have been in this great war and now there’s a person who could possibly be from BOTH sides? Maybe they’ll be ...
Mar 27, 2023 -
Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 5
I’m listening to Dinah Shore songs right now to get the vibe of the story and I like it! Now, onto the chapter. It’s sad that even her brother slammed ...
Mar 25, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2: The Second To Last Unicorn-Chapter 2
I think I’ll read “The Unicorn Quest” books, because unicorns are, as Ellie said, UNICORNS. Onto the chapter. I liked that Ellie climbed the top of the mountain no matter ...
Mar 24, 2023 -
Re: recycled
So why is Mallory friends with the villains? Seems a bit…SUSPICIOUS. I guess I’ll have to find out in the next episode. Snow and Charles must have already switched bodies ...
Mar 23, 2023
