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  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Once Was An Angel

    I love this poem! Yes, circumstance doesn’t matter. What matters is the person’s character and how they’ll handle the situation. Despite everything, the man decided to be as good a ...

    Jan 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Unlearn

    I like the picture. Where did you find the image? I think that this poem is about the need to unlearn what society teaches us. We’re taught to look into ...

    Jan 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stairs

    Thank goodness stairs aren’t sentient, or else they would experience great pain and we would be in a lot of trouble. Could stairs lead a revolution? I don’t want to ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Satire, Humor Re: Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer Makes No Sense if You Think About It

    Well, I’m certainly glad that I read this essayn’t. While staying humorous, you do bring up some valid points. I do agree with your thoughts on the misfits. I think ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky of Imagination washed away

    Growing up is sad and facing reality is depressing. Everything we’ve ever imagined fades away. But we can find happiness in growing up. Of course it will never be the ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Poetry Compilation #3

    I love how this feels like a fairytale. It’s so interesting to read. It reminds me of Dungeons and Dragons. (It’s an rpg game in case you didn’t know.) I ...

    Jan 13, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: to you, my love from far away

    I think that the title works with the story! No, it’s not unrealistic. A wife misses her husband, so she writes letters to him. I think that the ending is ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Roles

    I think that the ending is actually pretty wholesome. A young child takes things into their own hands. Yes, the form of the poem does match how it’s written. Nothing ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: What a Girlfriend Is (or Serena’s Slice-of-life in Space)

    Ahhh Serena and Izzy are so cute together! I like how E4 supports them being together, it’s so wholesome to see. I hope that their relationship stays intact no matter ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: down the rabbit hole

    I like how it’s written like magic. Like writing is a fantastical art and in many ways, it is. It can be hard though, as shown in this poem. It ...

    Jan 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #5, Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 2

    Aw, poor Cleo! When she’s not sick, she gets freaking kidnapped. I wonder how many days have passed since Cleo was kidnapped by Hana. I’m guessing maybe two or three ...

    Jan 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1

    The Kitsune’s name is Hana. I wonder where Hana is taking Cleo and where they’re going. I’m amazed at how calm Cleo is right now. She must have had really ...

    Jan 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #3: Police Transcript 03

    Alright, so I’m changing my mind about this ”victim”. Exactly who do they think they are to be calling the police like that when there is nothing wrong? I’m not ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #2: Police Transcript 02

    So the victim has healing powers? Maybe the victim is the true angel that is mentioned in the title. Could they be a possible candidate of the police force? I ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #1: Police Transcript 01

    I’m glad that everything went well with the capturing of the suspect. I saw this in the Green Room and thought to take a look. I wonder who these angels ...

    Jan 4, 2023


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