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It seems to be about understanding someone no one else understands. I like the way this poem was written! It’s like the person being mentioned is the sunlight streaming in ...

Yay! They all stopped the Wendigo! This wouldn’t be an easy task, considering how strong Wendigos are. But it seems like these people know what they’re doing! And they gained ...

It’s sad, but true. One must grow from the sorrow to live for the present. If nothing was done, Kaylah would have had a hard life. She probably would have ...

How simply riveting! We all need a warrior chicken to save us! The majestic feathers and the beautiful clucking would sweep any Princess off her feet! I’d say that this ...

Is it bad that it’s only chapter three and I already ship Edith with Maiken? I just think that Maiken sounds really interesting and I would love to see their ...

Whoa! She’s far out into the woods now. And she entered a den of wolves! Hopefully all will be well. My favorite part in the story was the rain drops. ...

Ooh I love dark fairytales and this is just *chef’s kiss* beautiful! I like Edith already. She seems like a kind person, but also someone who will do what needs ...

The narrator is fighting for change. Blood runs down their face. A quick wipe and they’re back in. Back in the fight. Ready to fight for what is right. It ...

Beautiful and a bit creepy. I got a better idea of what this story was about as I read further along. Will Soham find peace? Will he be born, in ...

The man burns on the inside. So he burns the woman to extinguish his own flame. He wishes not to face his own feelings and instead takes his anger out ...

Why yes, Paxton, you’re in big trouble, because you don’t try. At all. As for the story, it’s very interesting. I wonder what happened in Paxton’s life to make him ...

It looks like the boy and Quill only have each other. It’s them against the war. What will become of them? Will they be able to stay together? Or will ...

Cool story so far! It seems like Paxton doesn’t want to make an effort to change his life, like he already gave up. Amanda seems to love Paxton and wants ...

Oh man..how is Kim going to get anything done with those kids around? It’s better for Kim to be alone, without the others bothering her. I have one question, though. ...

I really like this extract of a story. I’ll be sure to read the actual story if you post it. I like how you described Paxton getting increasingly angry with ...