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Re: Where The Monster Lays
Wow! Scary! I don’t think that there was an actual otherworldly monster at all. I think that Bradley may have killed his family and set his house on fire in ...
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Re: Silences
Whoa…that… was spooky. I didn’t know who was narrating until near the end of the story. Where is Ryan now? In a pyscho ward? Is Ivan there too? Did Ivan ...
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Re: Wonderful
I’d thought I’d ought to go and check this story out. I like it! It’s very simple and cute. I like the ending, when Joy and her family are decorating ...
Dec 1, 2022 -
Re: Top 10 Weird Things in My Life Right Now | A Short Story in Epistolary Form
Looks like Susie Z is going to have a lot to deal with. Susie Z is a member of a very powerful family and she was destined to save the ...
Nov 30, 2022 -
Re: Lessons From a Ghost
Lessons all of humanity could learn. What I liked about this poem was the mention of a ghost in a positive way. Like the friend who is always there for ...
Nov 29, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Eleven, Part One
Goodness, Jasmine! You should know not to to stick your nose in things you don’t understand. Bad things happen to kids who creep to places they aren’t supposed to creep…*insert ...
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Re: Happy 18th Birthday YWS
What a lovely poem! YWS is my favorite writing site. This does describe the site wonderfully. We all come together to share our ideas, our thoughts, and our stories. Hopefully ...
Nov 27, 2022 -
Re: ~Coffee Mate~ Ch.1 Gorgeous Young Man
Hilarious, and wonderful! I totally act like Marge whenever Halloween arrives! Nobody can stop me when I’m in costume. As for Mandy..wow, she sounds so annoying and inconsiderate. I just…wow. ...
Nov 26, 2022 -
Re: The Tail of Timothy and Other YWS Shenanigans
Ah yes, the average day at YWS. A talking cat and an evil cake. Really pretty normal. And popcorn is such an abomination. I dislike popcorn in real life because ...
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Re: the urn on the mantle and a shower of pink rose petals
This AU sounds sad. Eddie is more disconnected from the world than ever. Poor Belle can’t be free unless Eddie lets her…I’ll be sure to read stories about this AU ...
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Re: The Princess the Elf and the Necromancer: Chapter 5
Oh no! Aldwyn has been captured by a bunch of goblins and a mysterious woman named Miss Levona. If Miss Levona is this powerful, I can’t imagine how her master ...
Nov 23, 2022 -
Re: The Princess the Elf and the Necromancer: Chapter 4
What is that bonfire all about? I don’t think that robbers caused it. Does it have something to do with Bob? Could Bob have set something aflame? Did Bob burn ...
Nov 22, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Ten
WE FINALLY KNOW WHO HER FATHER IS AND WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM!!! YAYYYYY!!! But now what? It can’t just end there. The mysterious package, the far-off grave. Who gave her ...
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Re: The Princess the Elf and the Necromancer: Chapter 3
MWAHAHA Lloyd, you haven’t read any of these modern fairytales. You don’t know that you’re going to fall in love with Irvina. At least, that’s what I think is going ...
Nov 20, 2022 -
Re: The Princess the Elf and the Necromancer: Chapter 2
They’re all going to run away from King George, aren’t they? Lloyd, Irvina, and Aldwyn. All to some dark corner of the forest, hidden from society. Hidden from Darreck, George, ...
Nov 19, 2022
