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Re: The Princess, the Elf, and the Necromancer: Chapter 1
Lloyd sounds very interesting. He doesn’t seem like a bad guy. I kind of want him and Irvina to fall in love. The Princess and The Necromancer, and Aldwyn the ...
Nov 18, 2022 -
Re: soulmates or other miscellaneous things
Christmas is a time to be merry. Although for others, it is a time to remind them of their loneliness. Why can’t people love each other or treat one another ...
Nov 17, 2022 -
Re: moth thoughts
I read the poem from the middle, then to the left, then to the right. I like how you can read this poem in different ways and that everyone can ...
Nov 16, 2022 -
Re: too tired to dream
This poem seems…sad. Left behind and feeling forgotten. Like one could get lost in the feeling of memories and time. But just because one is left behind, doesn’t mean that ...
Nov 15, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Nine
What? Amelia was once…happy? And Kim has been to Beatrice’s house before? Who sent her the photo album? It couldn’t have been Amelia, because she isn’t a necromancer. It couldn’t ...
Nov 14, 2022 -
Re: Take me Home
Home is where the heart is and the heart was in the treehouse, with nature. Away from the hubbub of humans and all around them. In the cool of night, ...
Nov 13, 2022 -
Re: Home
The heart is lost and can’t find a home. It has lost the touch for love and needs to be loved once again. It has been forgotten and covered in ...
Nov 12, 2022 -
Re: Mr. Mayor
Hmmm… Mr.Mayor seems very suspicious. He’s hiding something. Is Madam Mayor even telling us the truth? How much is being told? What are all of the lies? Who knows where ...
Nov 11, 2022 -
Re: my favorite book
This poem tells of being with a friend all the way through, no matter what, because you care about them. I like how you say that your favorite book is ...
Nov 10, 2022 -
Re: Conversations Meant To Be Forgotten
I like how the subject of the conversation keeps changing, as if years were passing in between them. I also like the jar with the glowing branches. It’s really pretty ...
Nov 9, 2022 -
Re: Describing the sky
Funny and cute! There are a lot of poems describing how “blue and beautiful” the sky is, but do people even realize that the sky isn’t always blue? Here are ...
Nov 8, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Eight
Is there a potential friendship between Kim and Jasmine? Perhaps. And why on Earth would Jasmine take Kim to her house? Shouldn’t she have left Kim for Beatrice to find ...
Nov 7, 2022 -
Re: Sorrows of the Deep
This… is beautiful. I take it that everyone is a merperson? Cool! You would like to think of what happens next? Well, you could have the thing show itself to ...
Nov 6, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 2/2
Oh man… this got dark. Why did the protagonist kill Audrey? Was it really Alex the whole time, knowing that something was up? Will Alex and Chris become the smiling ...
Nov 5, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 1/2
What is this place? What is the monster? Why do they go into the dimension if there’s danger? Something happened with Chris’ Mom for sure. Maybe that thing took his ...
Nov 4, 2022
