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Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (2)
Already Maysi decided that they’re never going home? What? Why? They’re just going to stay in that strange land forever and they’ll never see Sully or anyone else ever again? ...
Nov 3, 2022 -
Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (1)
And now comes the best part! When Adam and Maysi drift off through a portal to another world! I don’t think that the pool had a drain in the first ...
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Re: Pale brightness of the Moon
How beautiful and sorrowful. The pale brightness of the moon which once brought a calm into the air now only brings fear. The white glow of the hazy moon now ...
Nov 1, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven
WHAT??! Someone screamed?!! Somebody Kim knows, and you’re just going to leave us in cliffhanger like that?!! That’s criminal! (It’s a joke by the way). This brought us more insight ...
Oct 31, 2022 -
Re: that night
It seems like it’s about one single night that changes everything. The night when truth is revealed. It’s lost love and lonely nights. I liked the dark and romantic tone ...
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Re: jupiter wishes
This poem is so gorgeous. :0 I can see the stars and solar system with the words written in this. It’s like the whole solar system is sparkling. I think ...
Oct 29, 2022 -
Re: Swashbucklers (Prologue)
Dang. Poor Adam Rivera. :( He’s lost connection with his daughter and he’s teaching a bunch of losers. What a shame… or is it? You said in the blurb that ...
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Re: Shadows
Whoa. :0 Spookyyy! I’m excited to read this series. I at first thought that this was going to be horror, because of the title and what I read, but I ...
Oct 27, 2022 -
Re: a too-hot shower
The “too-hot” shower, as told in this poem, is the blurred world in which the narrator is forced to hide in because a certain person changed them beyond recognition. Or ...
Oct 26, 2022 -
Re: Hellscape/Garden of Eden
The “Hellscape”, as described in the poem, is the industrialized world, the future. The “Garden of Eden”, is nature, coming down with its soft, gentle rain. This poem, I believe, ...
Oct 25, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Six
They’re calling Beatrice a witch? I thought that the whole lot of them were witches. I guess not. Goodness, it feels like everyone hates Kim and that’s not fair to ...
Oct 24, 2022 -
Re: fear in Red Underline
Whoa. I really liked this poem and the intentional errors. :0 It shows that the narrator isn’t thinking clearly. Their mind is in a haze of fear and desperation. And ...
Oct 23, 2022 -
Re: Autumn Flame
This is so wholesome! Opening up takes trust and time. Your heart will figure out when it’s right. I absolutely adore the autumn scenery! I can smell the pumpkin spice ...
Oct 22, 2022 -
Re: kindred
Very dark. :0 I like it. It’s final. This family is done. When the narrator of the poem dies, all traces of their family will be gone. Every. Single. One. ...
Oct 21, 2022 -
Re: Cycling
Cycling through life. Reaching to the top. Climbing through the mountain. Braving through the terror. When you reach the top, you find the cool wind and spectacular view. Yes, life ...
Oct 20, 2022
