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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (2)

    Already Maysi decided that they’re never going home? What? Why? They’re just going to stay in that strange land forever and they’ll never see Sully or anyone else ever again? ...

    Nov 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (1)

    And now comes the best part! When Adam and Maysi drift off through a portal to another world! I don’t think that the pool had a drain in the first ...

    Nov 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Mystery / Suspense Re: Pale brightness of the Moon

    How beautiful and sorrowful. The pale brightness of the moon which once brought a calm into the air now only brings fear. The white glow of the hazy moon now ...

    Nov 1, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven

    WHAT??! Someone screamed?!! Somebody Kim knows, and you’re just going to leave us in cliffhanger like that?!! That’s criminal! (It’s a joke by the way). This brought us more insight ...

    Oct 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: that night

    It seems like it’s about one single night that changes everything. The night when truth is revealed. It’s lost love and lonely nights. I liked the dark and romantic tone ...

    Oct 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: jupiter wishes

    This poem is so gorgeous. :0 I can see the stars and solar system with the words written in this. It’s like the whole solar system is sparkling. I think ...

    Oct 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Swashbucklers (Prologue)

    Dang. Poor Adam Rivera. :( He’s lost connection with his daughter and he’s teaching a bunch of losers. What a shame… or is it? You said in the blurb that ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shadows

    Whoa. :0 Spookyyy! I’m excited to read this series. I at first thought that this was going to be horror, because of the title and what I read, but I ...

    Oct 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: a too-hot shower

    The “too-hot” shower, as told in this poem, is the blurred world in which the narrator is forced to hide in because a certain person changed them beyond recognition. Or ...

    Oct 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hellscape/Garden of Eden

    The “Hellscape”, as described in the poem, is the industrialized world, the future. The “Garden of Eden”, is nature, coming down with its soft, gentle rain. This poem, I believe, ...

    Oct 25, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Six

    They’re calling Beatrice a witch? I thought that the whole lot of them were witches. I guess not. Goodness, it feels like everyone hates Kim and that’s not fair to ...

    Oct 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Technology Re: fear in Red Underline

    Whoa. I really liked this poem and the intentional errors. :0 It shows that the narrator isn’t thinking clearly. Their mind is in a haze of fear and desperation. And ...

    Oct 23, 2022
  • Art » Narrative, Romantic Re: Autumn Flame

    This is so wholesome! Opening up takes trust and time. Your heart will figure out when it’s right. I absolutely adore the autumn scenery! I can smell the pumpkin spice ...

    Oct 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: kindred

    Very dark. :0 I like it. It’s final. This family is done. When the narrator of the poem dies, all traces of their family will be gone. Every. Single. One. ...

    Oct 21, 2022
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Cycling

    Cycling through life. Reaching to the top. Climbing through the mountain. Braving through the terror. When you reach the top, you find the cool wind and spectacular view. Yes, life ...

    Oct 20, 2022


hmm i think i just have to start typing and hopefully a poem will fall out of me
— spottedpebble