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Re: It's Nothing
When all is left in the mind but nothingness, it is when the prettiest of ideas will come about. If one will allow them to come about, then all will ...
Oct 19, 2022 -
Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer
Such a pretty poem speaking the truth about growing up! It’s like you are expected to know everything and be ready for all that the real world will bring, yet ...
Oct 18, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Five
So the reanimated are never quite alive? They’re just monsters? How sad. Imagine all the people who were wonderful in life, but reduced to skeletal creatures in death. I have ...
Oct 17, 2022 -
Re: credit card applications as a metaphor
The real world looms and taunts us once we are thrown into the open. Credit cards, like life, promises many things for us, but can we obtain those things? Are ...
Oct 16, 2022 -
Re: the art of decomposition
I really enjoyed this poem! I like how you write that decomposition is the emotions that can kill. Like decomposition, overwhelming emotions can destroy someone from the inside-out, making them ...
Oct 15, 2022 -
Re: On Breezy Days When the Veil Seems Thinner
Ooh. It’s very romantic. The poem speaks of someone who may have died, but they aren’t yet dead. They are merely waiting to be swept away by the autumn wind, ...
Oct 14, 2022 -
Re: Wishes of Rain
What I got from this poem:It’s about wanting to be free, like the rain. To glide freely in this place called life. To dance like the sparkled water that gives ...
Oct 13, 2022 -
Re: Glass of Water
It ends happily and justly, with you and your friend finding the stream of water. I liked reading this poem because it teaches that we can heal one another and ...
Oct 12, 2022 -
Re: You Fell In Love Again, Silly Idiot
I really liked this short story that you made! This was very wholesome. :) My favorite part (Difficult to pick) was how you described yourself as a shadow, as I’m ...
Oct 11, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Four
Goodness! Kim just ran away from her Grandma and is now lost in the woods! Will she be able to escape? Or will she become rodent food? What if there ...
Oct 10, 2022 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
This was hilarious! Oh boy, where do I start? Is it the fact that Bella’s love (excuse me, obsession) is on point? Or the fact that the Author (whoever they ...
Oct 9, 2022 -
Re: Movie Recs
Honestly I feel the same way about movies. No one will understand how I feel about the wondrous beauty that is known as films. I like how it seems like ...
Oct 8, 2022 -
Re: The Sunny Day
Haha! Cute poem. The sun knows that it’s an important source to bring joy. Who knows? Maybe it will, ”Brighten someone’s day!” I am one of those people who prefer ...
Oct 7, 2022 -
Re: Song
This is an interesting little thing that you wrote. The title is “Song” and the actual writing piece talks about being afraid of the end. Could it be that the ...
Oct 6, 2022 -
Re: Selling happiness
This story was very meaningful. Cehyn works to make the lives of others better, but in the end, she is only human. She cannot cure everyone. It is up to ...
Oct 5, 2022
