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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's Nothing

    When all is left in the mind but nothingness, it is when the prettiest of ideas will come about. If one will allow them to come about, then all will ...

    Oct 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer

    Such a pretty poem speaking the truth about growing up! It’s like you are expected to know everything and be ready for all that the real world will bring, yet ...

    Oct 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Humor Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Five

    So the reanimated are never quite alive? They’re just monsters? How sad. Imagine all the people who were wonderful in life, but reduced to skeletal creatures in death. I have ...

    Oct 17, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: credit card applications as a metaphor

    The real world looms and taunts us once we are thrown into the open. Credit cards, like life, promises many things for us, but can we obtain those things? Are ...

    Oct 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Re: the art of decomposition

    I really enjoyed this poem! I like how you write that decomposition is the emotions that can kill. Like decomposition, overwhelming emotions can destroy someone from the inside-out, making them ...

    Oct 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: ​On Breezy Days When the Veil Seems Thinner

    Ooh. It’s very romantic. The poem speaks of someone who may have died, but they aren’t yet dead. They are merely waiting to be swept away by the autumn wind, ...

    Oct 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Wishes of Rain

    What I got from this poem:It’s about wanting to be free, like the rain. To glide freely in this place called life. To dance like the sparkled water that gives ...

    Oct 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Glass of Water

    It ends happily and justly, with you and your friend finding the stream of water. I liked reading this poem because it teaches that we can heal one another and ...

    Oct 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: You Fell In Love Again, Silly Idiot

    I really liked this short story that you made! This was very wholesome. :) My favorite part (Difficult to pick) was how you described yourself as a shadow, as I’m ...

    Oct 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Four

    Goodness! Kim just ran away from her Grandma and is now lost in the woods! Will she be able to escape? Or will she become rodent food? What if there ...

    Oct 10, 2022
  • Script » General, General Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur

    This was hilarious! Oh boy, where do I start? Is it the fact that Bella’s love (excuse me, obsession) is on point? Or the fact that the Author (whoever they ...

    Oct 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Movie Recs

    Honestly I feel the same way about movies. No one will understand how I feel about the wondrous beauty that is known as films. I like how it seems like ...

    Oct 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Sunny Day

    Haha! Cute poem. The sun knows that it’s an important source to bring joy. Who knows? Maybe it will, ”Brighten someone’s day!” I am one of those people who prefer ...

    Oct 7, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Song

    This is an interesting little thing that you wrote. The title is “Song” and the actual writing piece talks about being afraid of the end. Could it be that the ...

    Oct 6, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Selling happiness

    This story was very meaningful. Cehyn works to make the lives of others better, but in the end, she is only human. She cannot cure everyone. It is up to ...

    Oct 5, 2022


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