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This poem was so cute! I like how the message leads to a point where one must be careful with someone so that they don’t let their emotions change them ...

1000 years of no dying? Pure perfection? Somehow, that’s even worst than the flaming pits of Hell! I like how this poem describes a perfect world where even vomiting is ...

Well, it looks like it will take a while for Kim to adjust, but hopefully she’ll get the hang of it. Hopefully. My favorite part would have to be near ...

Hello! I think that this poem nicely portrays Tim’s angst towards his role as Robin. My favorite lines were ”because what is life in this dark city without your light?” ...

Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy? A beautifully unholy match made in Hell. I love how you made it seem like even if things don’t work out, Ivy will still be ...

Hello! I’ve come to review your poem. First thing I want to say is WOW. I love how it feels like the girl is lost and trying to find her ...

I liked how you wrote this poem. It feels like the introduction to an epic fantasy series and I really enjoy reading fantasies. You can feel the determination in this ...

Hello! I’ve come to review your story. First off, I would like to mention how much I love the creepiness of it. The idea that a party literally kills toy ...

I have no idea if Beatrice or Amelia should be trusted. Amelia didn’t even explain things to Kim. She just sent her to the mysterious Beatrice. If I’m not mistaken, ...

The narrator wants true, honest love, which means telling their partner when they are in the wrong and sometimes feeling hatred for them. But everything is hidden under smiles and ...

Eating slugs:A young boy crushes hard on one of the girls. She is the only thing on his mind . His friends grow annoyed with him. They dare him to ...

This shows that maybe Narcissius is aware of his curse and is aware that what he’s doing is wrong, but can’t help the vain desire to just stare and stare ...

Very eerie..never go against the wishes of those you love, or they will come back to haunt you. Silas should have burned her body like she asked him to. I ...

Whoa, whoa, WHOA! That went from zero to one hundred real quick. I liked it. I have a few questions, though. How is the narrator telling the story? Did they ...

Oh goodness…She’s sending Kim far, far away, to the house of crazies! Maybe her Dad is one of them. Maybe he (whoever he may be) is a necromancer and she’s ...