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Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter One
Kim has brought back a bunch of dead frogs? What will she do next? Suppose her powers get out of hand? What if her Dad is dead and she brings ...
Sep 19, 2022 -
Re: a wild woman, a burning stake
Who was the Great-Grandmother, exactly? A wild woman or a woman who followed her dreams? That is left for us, the reader, to decide. This poem was deliciously dark and ...
Sep 18, 2022 -
Re: exfoliation
The individual tries desperately to rid their face of any blemishes, to show that they can be beautiful in this cruel world. Beauty isn’t just a desire, it’s a need. ...
Sep 17, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 15
I saw that you wrote this entry in 2020. I have no idea if you intend to continue this series. If you do, then I hope Luke is let out ...
Sep 16, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | 13 2/2 and 14
Goodness! I thought that Luke was turning to the dark side for a moment. The I just said sounds like I’m talking about Star Wars if taken out of context. ...
Sep 15, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 13 1/2
So Layla got accepted into a fashion university? Things are looking up for the L family. Luke and Lily are heirs to the throne. Layla is going to a fashion ...
Sep 14, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 12
WHOA! Luke and Lily are heirs to the throne? That was totally unexpected. The Queen seemed nice, so why was she upset with Ashley? Because she was breaking the rules? ...
Sep 12, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 11
Does Lily know that Ashley is the diary girl? Will everyone find out what Luke and Lily are secretly doing? Will they be horribly punished? Will they be cursed? I ...
Sep 12, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 10
Lily is just lonely? Ashley doesn’t talk to her? Hold on. If Ashley was turned into a diary a long time ago, she might be in a different grade than ...
Sep 11, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 9
Yass! Ashley isn’t a diary anymore. She’s a fairy! Oh and it looks like Luke might have a crush on her. Now that the diary is just a diary and ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 8
Turning someone into a diary is pretty harsh to me. Imagine how Ashley felt. How her family felt when they thought she died. The characters know why she’s a diary, ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 7
Will Lily help the diary become a fairy again? Andrealama and Emalia are both bad friends! I didn’t expect that at all. I thought Andrealama was a good fairy but ...
Sep 7, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 6
Lily is in Elementary school? I think she’s in sixth grade because she doesn’t sound that young. But I could be wrong. Luke used Google Translate? This fairy world sounds ...
Sep 6, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 5
I guess the well couldn’t take anymore wishes. Wait..what if the well isn’t a well? What if it was cursed just like the diary? Is everything in this world cursed ...
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 4
So Luke is going to break the diary’s curse? Verrryy interesting. I don’t think Emalia likes Lily anymore. Maybe she stopped liking her a long time ago. The diary doesn’t ...
Sep 4, 2022
