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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 3
So the diary not only takes back and seems to have a life of its own, it was also cursed to be a diary? I didn’t expect that. I can’t ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 2
So the diary talks back? Interesting. Does Emalia really like Lily? or is she just pretending to like her? I have a feeling she is going to get karma some ...
Sep 2, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 1
I like this so far! I’ll be sure to check out more! I feel bad for Andrealama. I think she’s a nice person with the unfortunate curse of having horn-shaped ...
Sep 1, 2022 -
Re: and still I am haunted
I loved the imagery of ghosts and haunted houses used to describe lost love and being alone.A haunted mansion was once a glorious palace with flowers and laughter and love ...
Aug 30, 2022 -
Re: Le Chemin
Reading this reminded me of when I read “Heidi” for the first time.I was enchanted by the beauty of the Swiss alps.It’s one of my favorite classics.The flowers, the birds, ...
Aug 30, 2022 -
Re: Part of You
I would imagine that this poem is about these thoughts that grip at you and haunt you.You’re unable to talk about them and get them off your one seems to ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: Hands that Don't Love
I was trying to figure out the meaning of the poem, so I read some of the other reviews. I don’t know if this comes close, but on another writing ...
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky
Growing up is exciting and fun-but also utterly terrifying.I like how you described it using the unpredictable,beautiful, and frightening woods, because it certainly isn’t a walk in the park.You wil
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold
The illusions people can give.The ideas someone screws into our heads that corrupt us.The very fantasy they call “love” , only to be broken if we choose to break free.Only ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: notes app apology
I can imagine someone thinking over a text and then not sending one, because it doesn’t feel right.Everything just feels so cold and wrong and different.There’s so much to say, ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: hot cicada summer
It’s the feeling of not belonging somewhere.Of feeling like an alien.I liked that there was no sets the feel of that loneliness in a crowd.Of sticking out.This poem could also ...
Aug 23, 2022 -
Re: "Let it Load"
I know this is old but I’m going to review anyway.First of all, this will always be matter the era, we’ll always search up anything that comes to mind. Second ...
Aug 22, 2022 -
Re: somewhere, folded in under the horizon
I will try and interpret the poems.The first one is about depression, the second one is about finding positivity (the horizon) in life (the destination). The third one is about ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: Writers Block
I hate when this happens.Right when I have a good idea and I’m all excited about it, everything only goes downhill from there.I suddenly have no idea what I’ve just ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God
Hilarious! I liked it. It reminds me of when I was writing my story “Eloise-the demented doll woman” (which you can check out on my profile) and how I was ...
Aug 19, 2022
