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Re: The Wrong Cheese
Goodness! Poor Heather! All she wanted was Red Leicester cheese.She got every kind of cheese imaginable but not the one she wanted.I never tried Red Leicester favorite is Brie, but ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room
I couldn’t stop laughing. I’m imagining Green room works as beasts. I’m sure you have a lot of slaying (I mean reviewing) to do in the Green room, because there ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Dementis: Chapter 1
Hmm..I could be wrong, but I have a feeling Kaya isn’t crazy. Maybe she was in the wrong place at the wrong time and that’s how she ended up in ...
Aug 16, 2022 -
Re: You should totes ignore this.
I’m going to read your other works.But for now, I’ll review this. Why? Because I can! First of all, this was incredibly breathtaking. This sentence is so meaningful and powerful. ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: Imagined Impossibilities
I think you are using flower imagery to show that even beautiful things like flowers dry out and die.I would say that I emphasize with the speaker because I feel ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: Numbscullery
It seems as though this starts as a deathly poem and ends as a dreamy one.Were the lower case letters intentional? What was the theme of this poem? Is there ...
Aug 13, 2022 -
Re: The kings eldest child, prologue
Quite interesting! I feel like they will suffer the fate of all royal families and come crashing down.The family will kill and burn each other.A legacy drenched in blood and ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: Haiku Sequence [Library, Painted stone and Bougainvillea]
Each individual haiku you wrote holds its own special story.The library holds books and adventures of all kind.The painted stone is art amongst the green gracefully growing on it.Finally,we have ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: The Wounds of Love
Love is beautiful.But as beautiful as it is,it hurts like a gaping wound.When the one you love disappears from your grasp forever.Forever in your heart,yet no longer yours to love.Just..gone.I ...
Aug 11, 2022 -
Re: The moon witch- 1&2 + extra
I will guess the context.Selene lives in a magical kingdom where people have different colored skin and hair,Gods and talking animals exist, and men like Selene have feminine names.Selene and ...
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: An Almost-Sonnet: Table for Two
I have a feeling that this other individual just wants to eat.They don’t want to take the time to actually savor it.I don’t feel like that agreement was genuine-I feel ...
Aug 8, 2022 -
Re: Writers block Piece?? I have no title :')
Wow! I didn’t expect that twist! What ever happened to Myria’s dear mother? I believe the title should be “Familiar Faces” because one would know who their mother is, but ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: The Sky-Whale
The beach air welcomes us.The salty wind tosses our hair into funny curls.And the whale emerges, majestic and glorious.This was a lovely poem! I could smell the air of the ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: I wish
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: The Blooming Blue Iris
I haven’t read the manga so I’m a little confused, but I enjoyed the poem nonetheless.I sense that this is a love poem.Not the kind that is ethereal and bright, ...
Aug 5, 2022
