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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Elias

    To answer your question,I think this takes place in the 80s because you mention bright hoodies,streetlights,and for the type of person Elias is,I get the feeling that he is nihilistic ...

    Aug 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Snake Poem

    Nice rhythm poem! Like a snake.I don’t fear snakes lol.I have characters based on them.But thanks for the warning :D. I wonder what song it’s based on.When I first read ...

    Aug 2, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    Wow! Those were some interesting facts about the Disney Princesses.I didn’t know Aurora was more forgotten.Growing up,Aurora was my favorite Disney Princess because she wore pink.I used to hate Tian

    Aug 1, 2022
  • Art » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: My Lover Chapter One: The Encounter

    This is an interesting love story! I can’t wait for more.What will Qiangwei do next? Guess I’ll have to find out.Just a few questions:Is his name Mingjun or Kaiwei? Does ...

    Jul 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, Mystery / Suspense Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?

    Is there a way I’m supposed to read this or is it fine any way? I wonder if the end of the poem has different meanings if started differently.I like ...

    Jul 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Snow In New East World

    seems like pieces of the sun are falling off and turning into snowflakes.These snowflakes aren’t ordinary snowflakes.They evaporate straight through your tongue, leaving you to taste your own tissue

    Jul 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Cross Your Heart, Hope We Don't Die - A Stranger Things AU Fanfiction

    As soon as I saw that it was a Stranger Things fanfiction I knew what I had to do:Read it, of course! From what I read, it looks like Eddie ...

    Jul 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Veni, Vidi, Vici

    I knew Regulus Black was from Harry Potter,but I didn’t know much about him till I went on Google.I guess that says something about who he is,eh? The only people ...

    Jul 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Abstract Love

    Welcome to YWS! Can I just say that I like how you put them close together? I’m not sure if that was intentional,but it looks like someone’s cascading and complicated ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter

    Hmph.I don’t know is this was the meaning you were trying to convey,but here’s what I got:The person just wants to carry these weights off their back and take a ...

    Jul 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: Prince Charming

    You aren’t perfect.You are flawed as is everyone.Prince Charming is our want but also our fear.I like the idea of Prince Charming you presented! It is so true! I feel ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Other Re: Breathe

    And just like the people in the poem,I am intrigued! Who are they? What world do they live in? What are they? Guess we shall see.Just one sign telling them ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: To A Boy I Saw in the Supermarket Once

    Sometimes you can really like someone even if only for a fleeting this case,it’s towards a boy at the supermarket.The imagery you used is just WOW.Like I could never.Loved how ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?

    People’s words can really get to us.They can damage our well-being and hurt our soul.If you can find positivity in the little things you’re good.It’s not natural to be happy ...

    Jul 21, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: So you drive a BMW?

    Well! That’s one way to get the girl! How funny! He doesn’t even own those cars but the other guy doesn’t know that! I also thought this was a cute ...

    Jul 20, 2022


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