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Re: Scarlet Night
I’ve never read something like this before.Where the same sentences tell two different stories.I first read it beginning to end for the victim and then end to beginning for the ...
Jul 4, 2022 -
Re: Leonardo da Vinci
Leonardo Da Vinci was more than a painter.He wanted to explore all the new possibilities.A true artist that he was.I liked how you wrote it.I thought that the words you ...
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Re: Is That Autumn I Hear?
When the time of autumn comes,I swear I can smell something.I feel like the season has a certain smell to it.Another thing,Halloween.I get so excited for the holiday.Watching the movies,wearing ...
Jul 2, 2022 -
Re: I Don’t Want To Let It Burn In The City Lights
I loved the message this poem gave! You can be young no matter what age you are.Your youth and growth can exist in harmony.It’s still there,your past self.A small will ...
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Re: Shadowed Painting
Oh how dark! How gothic! How moody! I love these types of poems.There’s something so romantic about them.Something so beautiful with darkness.Something that can just compel you.Something about the d
Jun 30, 2022 -
Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy
Splendid storytelling! The baker and Court Jester sure aren’t the King’s perfect little subjects.I wonder if something more will bloom from this romance.This was so lovely to read! It really ...
Jun 29, 2022 -
Re: The Last of The Ivory Days
The very last days of blissfulness.The last of the ivory days as the poem says.It’s too late to run from fate.That’s just what is the inevitable darkness that is to ...
Jun 29, 2022 -
Re: Deluge
Yes! Someone else who likes the rain! This felt like a tide of negative thoughts until the sweet yet salty rain washed it all often feels like the world is ...
Jun 27, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark Wood
Did it make me laugh? No because it takes a lot to get a laugh out of me XD.Does this feel like a poem? My answer is the same as ...
Jun 26, 2022 -
Re: Him
She loves him,yet she can’t have him.He doesn’t even know she exists.He’s only a fleeting stranger and then he leaves.If only they know each other,maybe then they love can be ...
Jun 26, 2022 -
Re: carousel
Oooh..This was so full of the love and carnival magic! A carousel of toxic love.A tide of saccharine overdose of chocolate hearts.The hearts don’t even taste sweet anymore.They’re just pain ...
Jun 24, 2022 -
Re: And at Midnight.
This sounds like an interesting dream you had.I like all the sensory details in the poem.They make it really fun and imaginative.I liked it when the birds flew to the ...
Jun 23, 2022 -
Re: The Holy Ghost spell !!
Huh.I never read anything like this.It’s nice.We all want to do something in life.We all want to make an impact.The question is:Do we have it in us? I also liked ...
Jun 22, 2022 -
Re: Wings
I take it that this is about a part of you that you love,if not your true self,that you hide from the world in fear of what they would all ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Springtime
During the Spring as the flowers bloom so does love.We have crushes,we see a fleeting human and already love them to death.We wish for these passings of kind looks to ...
Jun 20, 2022
