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Re: Night Driving
The night does have a hypnotic feel to it and you captured that well in the poem.I feel like if this had visuals,I would imagine it to be a fever ...
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: Sleepless Nights
I agree.I ask questions at night.This happens because people have more time to think during the night,there are no that’s what they do.Think.I thought this poem was nice and it ...
Mar 18, 2022 -
Re: A Letter to my Younger Self
We’ve all got regrets,things we can’t change.Things that we wish we could do over.Moments where we want to go back to who we were when we were young and innocent.It’s ...
Mar 17, 2022 -
Re: A
Is this poem a parent writing this to their daughter or is it that the little girl in space buns represents the childlike innocence in us all? Because it seems ...
Mar 16, 2022 -
Re: Can't the wind sigh louder?
I loved reading this poem.I take it that it is about someone who loves another person so much,that they view the person as a flawless entity.They are willing to do ...
Mar 15, 2022 -
Re: Letting go
I enjoyed reading this poem.I believe it’s about a man named Antonio,who holds so many mysteries for the other person,the person narrating the poem.Unless this poem is about something else,then ...
Mar 14, 2022 -
Re: The Little Brown Boat and Me
If I had to read this to someone,I would read it to my younger cousins,so that they can say they had an interesting poem read to them when they were ...
Mar 13, 2022 -
Re: Under the Tree in the Dream
To answer your questions:The images in the story make me think that there is mystery woven in the love for the girl mentioned.I think that my lack of knowledge on ...
Mar 12, 2022 -
Re: The Sins in Which I Part from You
I think this poem might be about not caring what other people think about you,because your lover loves long as your lover likes you,then you don’t worry about others.You don’t ...
Mar 11, 2022 -
Re: The Things You See
We all see so much more in the littlest of things.That’s what happens when you’ve got a kind heart and a vivid imagination.I loved the descriptions in the poem,it really ...
Mar 10, 2022 -
Re: hell is found in the children's section of the library
I don’t know if you’re a librarian or if you like putting books in their places,but boy,this sounds stressful! Children running around and touching things with their gross snot,unruly and ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Cosmic Travel
This was quite the descriptive poem! When I read it,I got an image of glimmering stars and infinite galaxies in my mind.I think that this poem is about people becoming ...
Mar 8, 2022 -
Re: betrayal
If this is based on something that actually happened to you,then I’m so sorry that it did! I know how that feels.A good friend of mine started ignoring me and ...
Mar 7, 2022 -
Re: Void
The person the narrator is describing is someone who lights up their life in a way no one else has,in a way no one ever has.It’s more than hard to ...
Mar 6, 2022 -
Re: Stupid puzzle
Ah yes,love is far from perfect.Often you’ll feel like you have each other,but you’re still together.Such are the things that happen with romance.This poem is wholesome,dark and funny at the ...
Mar 5, 2022
