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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The She-Devil

    I’ve dealt with this type of person in my life.What makes it even worse is that she was a childhood friend.The thing with these people is that it’s always going ...

    Feb 17, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Little Silver Sword

    Ooh..cool poem! I wish this were the original would be so much more interesting and action-packed to for the overall poem,I liked how you described her vengeance saying “Her eyes ...

    Feb 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When I Sit In Class

    I totally relate to this poem! The thing about having a lot on your mind,with your imagination and all,that relates to me.I do imagine a lot of creative ideas.I do ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Art » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Invitation

    That devastation one feels when we go someplace we enjoy and realize that we have to leave is absolutely horrifying.It’s also well-described over here.I wonder if the narrator and their ...

    Feb 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: I guess I'm only wondering how you crossed that road

    I like how the poem was laid out,it looked like a cascade of thoughts.I’d like to think it’s about doubting who you are and who you were.It’s about asking yourself ...

    Feb 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Chickens

    This was a cute poem you made.I enjoyed reading this poem about paints a vivid picture in my mind of a family farming chickens.I could picture this like a wholesome ...

    Feb 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: the end

    I’d take it that this poem is about when love cannot be reached,because there is too much in the way of your love.Too many obstacles,to the point where it’s like ...

    Feb 11, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, Teen Fiction Re: i read / too much / of you

    Aww…this is a nice poem! I love how this person cares for the other person and will love them no matter what,flaws and all.It’s so rare to find people like ...

    Feb 10, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: driving back from dinner

    So here’s my take on the poem:It’s about driving from a family event,not being able to talk to each other in the car,out with too much on your minds.Everything seems ...

    Feb 9, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: My invisible mask

    We hide our emotions from others,in fear of what will happen.But if we just talk about our feelings or write them down,we’ll feel better.Any of the two is helpful,as long ...

    Feb 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: To The Ever-Dishevelled Maid of the Eternal Mist

    I think the poem is pretty good for a first this your first time? I don’t want to assume or anything.But yes,the poem does have a rhyme kinda flow to ...

    Feb 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: fool's gold and false gods.

    Yes,when we are below people,we get labeled as the “crazy” or “weird” least,that’s what I think part of the poem is about.I also believe it is about someone who has ...

    Feb 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Purple Instructions

    So,what happens next? I guess that’s left to our imagination.I wonder if the flower has any significance in the story.Does it symbolize greed? Desire? Or perhaps,reality just out of reach,in ...

    Feb 5, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Carlo

    This was a fun short story to read about a disruptive seems like he doesn’t care for what the adults have to say.The only thing that’s got his attention is ...

    Feb 4, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: no (mirror lies) between us

    I have enjoyed reading this poem.It’s about love and how connected people feel with each other,that they’d do anything for each other.They’d wish for their very love to never,ever end.Alas,not ...

    Feb 3, 2022


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