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Re: What lies in the emptiness above the sky?
I love this interpretation of outer space you two made.It’s got beautiful imagery and describes the wonders of space as well.Space is a vast and limitless void.We admire it and ...
Jan 18, 2022 -
Re: Doomed Insurgent - Sestina
What a dark and detailed poem! The words and descriptions you used were very detailed and I could really picture it in my mind.Being completely helpless and forced into the ...
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Out of Sight
Ooh..this sounds like it could be part of a story.I think it’s about not being emotionally ready for the truth,about being unprepared for what is to come.I liked the descriptions ...
Jan 16, 2022 -
Re: It Hurts :)
Oof..I can relate to this poem.I had a friend for years and she just drifted off and really hurt..Overall,this poem was relatable and well-written.Trust me,you’ll meet new and better people,who ...
Jan 15, 2022 -
Re: The Burden Bearer
This poem sounds like it’s connected to a very interesting story.I liked reading this short and fun poem you made.I thought that you described this character in the poem very ...
Jan 15, 2022 -
Re: They answer my questions with confident lies
This is actually a very cool and unique poem.I think this poem could be about people who already have answers in their head that they don’t even think about.They just ...
Jan 13, 2022 -
Re: Tired
This was very descriptive and detailed.How you talk about being afraid to fall asleep,because of these cascading thoughts.All I have to say for that is to breathe and relax when ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Poetry Compilation #1
I liked all three of the poems.They were descriptive and had lovely imagery.They all had their own charm and imagery to them.I think my favorite poem was the second had ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Explaining Emetophobia
I liked this poem.The way you wrote it brings a sense of fear in the poem.Like we’re you,the author,experiencing your phobias.Yes,I do agree that a phobia is much more than ...
Jan 10, 2022 -
Re: Tree of Life
Ooh..I love the imagery in the was so descriptive.I could picture all of this in my mind,like a movie.I also liked the style of the font.The text you used in ...
Jan 9, 2022 -
Re: gaunt
Ooh..I loved this poem.The way you wrote it made it look like the person was slowly descending into insanity.I also loved the way you described it.I feel like the narrator ...
Jan 8, 2022 -
Re: Wooden Planks Floating
This poetically describes how we didn’t think much of this pandemic,how we were so first,people thought that it would only last a week and nothing more.What a surprise when we ...
Jan 7, 2022 -
Re: Freedom
This is intresting,to hear the thoughts of someone who is dying.The feeling of never going to be able to go back to the people you love,the feeling of being disconnected ...
Jan 6, 2022 -
Re: Elevator Music
This was a nicd short poem to read.Sometimes,it does feel like we are going nowhere admist our wants and will feel like being stuck in an elevator that leads to ...
Jan 5, 2022 -
Re: Gift from an angel
I enjoyed reading this poem about angels and the gift of life.The fact that people hate this angel makes so much sense,because we are taught that wanting stuff and having ...
Jan 4, 2022
