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Re: Water Poems: Flowchart
I liked reading this piece.The way the words were laid out gave the poem so much more impact and meaning.When the word “nothing“ is read,you can feel the nothingness from ...
Jan 3, 2022 -
Re: Catastrophic Pain
I love the way you described the feelings and pain the solider is going through as he walks among a matter who wins,in the end,a war is still a war.People ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: Reunion
I loved the details and imagery from the poem.The descriptions you used were magical and was fairy-tale does feel like a childhood memory with your descriptions.It’s how we all imagine ...
Jan 1, 2022 -
Re: A Piece of My Mind
I loved reading this poem! I can relate,I do stay awake at night with ideas.But how can anyone not? The inspiration comes late at night,when no one else is around ...
Dec 31, 2021 -
Re: Green is not always green
I’d say this poem could be about change and how we can’t’ always stop things from happening.We are the fish,fighting change,which is the ducks and the pond is the world,changing.Sometimes,it’s
Dec 30, 2021 -
Re: Happy New Year!
Ah yes,a poem celebrating the New Year! Something we all need after the two previous years that happened with us.I myself can’t wait for 2022.Maybe everything will be under control ...
Dec 29, 2021 -
Re: An Unfinished Tragedy
Wow..this poem was really emotional.The painful feeling of knowing that a beautiful love never started is described well over here! I have a question is this (or some of this,anyway) ...
Dec 28, 2021 -
Re: Prison of Perfection
Yes,I totally agree with what you just said in this piece,100%.Not only that,but I can relate to it,too.I really want to do things perfectly and make sure that the stuff ...
Dec 27, 2021 -
Re: For a Fallen Angel
I enjoyed the poem.This person,the narrator,would do anything to protect their loved ones.Even if it hurts them in the process,because they are helping their loved one out.Clearly the narrator feels ...
Dec 26, 2021 -
Re: A Sad Poem of References
I couldn’t decode where the quotes came from,but I think the one about great power coming with great responsibility is from “The Avengers“ and is said by Thor.I could be ...
Dec 25, 2021 -
Re: Winter Love
Oooh! Cute and nice winter poem to read on Christmas Eve.It’s got a nice message to it.Love will blossom like Winter and if it’s good and true,it will last for ...
Dec 24, 2021 -
Re: A Reindeer Adventure
Ooooh! Lovely poem to read before Christmas! It was so whimsical and fun,I picture this as a Christmas special.Bernadette and Hershell's friendship was adorable and I loved how you added ...
Dec 23, 2021 -
Re: he who hath...
I like this poem.Yes,love can give us these feelings.It’s very true.Now,I have to say,I loved the descriptions! It was well-detailed,I coukd picture it in my mind.The metophorical flames,the desire.
Dec 22, 2021 -
Re: I breathe brazenly
I have enjoyed reading this poem.I have to say,it was very descriptive! When you describe the ants crawling around the narrator’s toes and the wind playing with the narrator’s hair.I ...
Dec 21, 2021 -
Re: An ode to love lost
I have enjoyed reading this poem about lost love.We can love so hard,we forget what’s rational.We end up doing things based on that love and it can do more harm ...
Dec 20, 2021
