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Re: fuel economy
Yes,this poem could be relatable.We don’t want to spend our time thinking about our feelings,we don’t have time for ourselves.Why is that? Because we’re so focused on getting stuff done,we ...
Dec 19, 2021 -
Re: and the tides wash out traces of us
I enjoyed this poem.Yes,we’re afraid of being forgotten,everyone is,but some things are better left unsaid.Like the love that grows between people that warms them from one else needs to know ...
Dec 18, 2021 -
Re: To catch a sunrise.
I loved reading this poem.I wonder,is this about saying goodbye to love? Or,if the words “Goodbye” and “love” were people in a relationship and goodbye was thinking of a breakup,because ...
Dec 17, 2021 -
Re: liberation
I like this poem.Too often,we feel the need to relax and go to our imagination,to take a break from reality.This poem was lovely to read.I like how you ask if ...
Dec 16, 2021 -
Re: The Vending Machine
Oh wow…what an interesting story…I wonder if Maria will turn into vending machine food.Did she become the vending machine? How is it cursed? Who cursed it? Did someone or something ...
Dec 16, 2021 -
Re: Meditation as a Conversation
Ah yes,meditation.Not many of us have time for meditation,with everything that happens in our lives.If we see meditation as something necessary,like a meeting,then we’ll have time for it.I loved rea
Dec 15, 2021 -
Re: Born by the Spindle
I enjoyed this poem.I like how it talks about how we all want something in our lives,but never take time to enjoy it.We’re always craving for something faster and better.We ...
Dec 14, 2021 -
Re: Water Poems: Mind-map (or Things a River Asks)
I like this poem and how the river is personified.I believe that this poem is talking about the wishes of a river and wanting to be praised as much as ...
Dec 12, 2021 -
Re: The Last Day of Autumn
This was a very nice and lovely poem about autumn.The part where you mentioned that you were inspired to write this poem just by looking out the the train window ...
Dec 11, 2021 -
Re: Alone
Nice poem to read.I do feel like this sometimes when I write and I’ll feel lonely.Personally,I’d try to find a way to get to know people while also giving myself ...
Dec 10, 2021 -
Re: Pitter-Patter
I enjoyed the poem.I thought that it was beautiful and relatable.Sometimes,the soft pitter-patter of the rain is all that we need.Especially if you have nice book next to you.I myself ...
Dec 10, 2021 -
Re: Friendship
I enjoyed reading this wholesome poem about friendship.All this narrator wants us a good and honest friend,nothing more.We don’t get that very often.Usually,people will want something from us.This p
Dec 9, 2021 -
Re: Masih
I liked this poem.That was very meaningful to me because it talks about Caesar’s warriors and how they fought for good and the very importance of their was a powerful,descriptive ...
Dec 8, 2021 -
Re: The Woes of Perpetually Fleeting Intrigue
Lovely and dramatic story to read! It could just be a simple story about someone wanting to swim,like fish,but it could also be about someone being attacked by the rest ...
Dec 7, 2021 -
Re: Dinner Date
This was a fun poem to read.Yes,relationships can feel complicated,strained and practiced at times,but if you really trust,love and know the person,then everything will be free and alright.The poem it
Dec 5, 2021
