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Re: Emerald Eyes
I loved this short story.This person,fascinated by the cat,must mean something to the narrator.You mentioned that the cat was the only thing left of the narrator’s wife.Maybe the wife had ...
Dec 4, 2021 -
Re: Brain Vomit
That was a realistic,sad and emotional poem I read.Life can get hard and you might be tempted to end it,but no matter what,you’ll always have the courage to live,because there ...
Dec 3, 2021 -
Re: The Missionary's Folly
I enjoyed reading this poem! It made me wonder,could people suffer at the hands of God? Are they suffering because they have misused Earth? Is the world watching us,taking note ...
Dec 3, 2021 -
Re: I'm Insane
Oooh…cool poem about losing sanity,but then again,the narrator probably never had any.I love how you changed the punctuation of the poem to emphasize the narrator’s perspective on the narrator tal
Dec 2, 2021 -
Re: Mother Earth
This is a very true poem,Earth offered life to us and as humans,we took it.We humans can be cruel to life at times.This was something nice and short to read.But ...
Nov 30, 2021 -
Re: Her everything
This was a nice poem to read.It’s so real,you really put your emotion to it.Yes,often as humans,we do rely on others heavily,you’re right about that.But when we put every fiber ...
Nov 29, 2021 -
Re: Curiosity
Lovely poem! We do often warn others about being “too curious”,don’t we? It’s not good, because curiosity is what makes this world go round.You’re right about there being a difference ...
Nov 28, 2021 -
Re: The Candle Melting
Wow! What a sweet poem! It shows the love that is out there in the world.I sure hope the old woman and her child grow to have a lovely relationship ...
Nov 27, 2021 -
Re: i've gotten worse // since we last spoke
I imagine that this poem is about revisiting horrible memories and wanting to escape your past,but being unable to,because the memories are overwhelming.You can’t escape them no matter what.You can�
Nov 26, 2021 -
Re: CLICK
I liked this poem,it was fun to read.Maybe this person feels lost about who they are and what their purpose in life is.They want to be positive and happy,but can ...
Nov 25, 2021 -
Re: Wonderland
I liked this poem,it was cool! I loved how you described Wonderland in a few short lines.I also liked that you mentioned Dorothy,she and Alice kind of have the same ...
Nov 24, 2021 -
Re: Admission of the Whimsical
Lovely poem! I think this is about a common type of side character we may read about in fairytales and how they are overlooked.Maybe,it’s them sharing their feelings.Maybe this person ...
Nov 23, 2021 -
Re: I Will Always Stand by You
This was a sweet really shows that no matter what,the narrator will always stand by whoever they are addressing in the also shows that there are still people who will ...
Nov 22, 2021 -
Re: hell's angel
Oh wow…this poem scared me a bit.(In a good way) I thought this was about an angel getting rejected and sent to Hell,from the title,but after actually reading it,I think ...
Nov 21, 2021 -
Re: A broken piece
I loved reading this story! It really makes you think about who you are to your makes you wonder about your true intentions and your darkest secrets.The mirrors could all ...
Nov 20, 2021
