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Re: Storyteller Serves a Meal
I loved the poem.I thought it did nicely to explain the purpose and goals of the storyteller.The dishes symbolizes the stories the storyteller was telling.That’s another thing,I loved the use ...
Nov 19, 2021 -
Re: The Way It Changed
This was a fun story to read.About the ending…is Emma going to die? Also,can we trust Aiden? In this story,Aiden comes off as a loving boyfriend,but often,people that we trust ...
Nov 18, 2021 -
Re: The Corn Grows Towards The Sky
Cool and sad poem.I believe the poem talks about the things that happen which you can’t control in life.I thought it was interesting to choose the words:”I look around and ...
Nov 17, 2021 -
Re: Exit 17
I enjoyed reading this was sweet and romantic.I also enjoyed the writing style,how you added numbers and punctuation marks to the words and how you put parentheses in the some ...
Nov 16, 2021 -
Re: Nightmare
Oooh…cool poem.I love how ominous it the main character a good person or have they done unforgivable things in the past and now,they’re going to pay their debt for it? ...
Nov 15, 2021 -
Re: Potterer
I liked this poem.I can see why one would fear to have such a power,the power of creation.While you can create wonderful masterpieces with this power,you could also cause a ...
Nov 14, 2021 -
Re: Manic Pixie
Lovely poem! It sounded just like a children’s fairytale.The fact that the poem says that pixies can be broken,shared and put into jars,says what the narrator thinks about pixies.Maybe,pixies are ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: What Does it Mean to Dream
What does it mean to dream and to live? Those are both good questions that could have different answers,neither of them wrong.These are my answers,someone else may think dream is ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: motion picture ghosts and other pleasantries
This was an interesting poem.I don’t think that this is a romance poem.I feel like the narrator believes it’s romance and love,but it’s far from it.The narrator feels protective to ...
Nov 11, 2021 -
Re: My Sunflower
I loved this short story! It was so cute and beautiful! I’m glad they ended up together! I also loved the descriptions you provided for the characters,especially the “starry-eyed girl” ...
Nov 10, 2021 -
Re: hot Chocolate
Cool little story about hot chocolate! First of all,I want to say that looks like a delicious cup of hot chocolate.Second,the details here are clear and precise.You were listing many ...
Nov 9, 2021 -
Re: i am always writing about stars
This was short,but it was nice to read.I liked it.I believe that this poem is about someone who is troubled and anxious,yet,they don’t want help,because their loneliness inspires their creativity.If
Nov 8, 2021 -
Re: A letter to the devil
This was a fun poem to read.Yes,we do blame the devil for most of our problems,but what is the devil’s story? What does he have to say? We ask ourselves ...
Nov 7, 2021 -
Re: The Barnacles on a Whale
Such a sad and emotional poem to read.I can’t imagine how upset and devastated the mother must have felt to leave her child and knowing that she’ll never see her ...
Nov 6, 2021 -
Re: hometown anarchy
I enjoyed reading this poem.This talks about how people can be forgotten from the world,fading away into nothingness.Everyone wants to be heard,but not everyone is heard.People are lost and are ...
Nov 5, 2021
