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Ooh..I liked this teaches us that we have so much we need to learn about life in general,it tells us that we need a greater understanding of the world and ...

I liked reading this poem! It’s relatable.Sometimes,we all feel like we’re going to break into pieces with the expectations the world puts on us,even if we keep on trying.We’ll still ...

This is a lovely little story from the perspective of a rose.This rose holds so many wishes and hopes for love,but it’s all drained and there is nothing left.The rose ...

I like this collaboration! The two poems put together sound wonderful.I love the lines:”I want a better life and so I’m cast away.” The narrator gets pushed away from a ...

This was a nice short poem I read.”Dandelions screaming”…is that supposed to represent the people in this world who ask-scream-for help,but never get any? Because people wish on dandelions,pluck

This is a cool poem,so liked this poem,it was beautiful.I feel like this is talking about the emotions when leaving something familiar,like home.You don’t want to leave home,but sometimes,you have ...

Cool poem.I wonder if this is a toxic relationship that won’t end well.The reference of:”..until the whole thing rumbled like a stomach and cracked at the seams and crumbled over ...

This was a fun story to read.I wonder if there is more to it,though.What if-this is probably off topic-the house was haunted and it wasn’t just something simple,like having ants ...

Cute and creepy! I had such a kick reading this little poem.It’s a nice thing to read for Halloween.I also like the question at the end,addressing the readers.”Who will be ...

Well,this could be what a void would feel if they were a person.I don’t know if that’s what your friend wanted,but it does sound like a poem a void would ...

I think this poem is about more than:”breaking your arm.” It’s about so much attention,it’s stifling.It’s no longer love,it’s drowning in pain.You don’t have the ability to speak.You jus

Hmmm..When I read this short poem,I thought of the saying:”Seeing red” but taken it supposed to be taken literally or is it talking about seeing the world in a bad ...

This was fun to read! Reading your old writing can really show how far you’ve also shows how much you’ve improved.We all have our first writing pieces that don’t sound ...

This is an emotional poem.You can see how much the other person meant-still means-to the narrator.The fact that they would let the other person go shows true love.It’s still losing ...

This was interesting and emotional to read.The dialogue between the two really shows how much they’ve come to know and accept each other.I might read some of your other I ...